Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-ToraxUruha, MiyavixSaga, Sa-chap 6/?

[sarcasm_chan]

hey there,
here is a new chap of my new fic ^^ please: ignore the weird chaptertitle thingy XD;;;;
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!
!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english is not my mother-tongue..
pairings: ToraxUruha, MiyavixSaga, Sagax? (mentioned

Comments

[juusuikan]

wow.
This is good *_*

[sarcasm_chan]

wow! =D thanks! =D
but..did you read the other chaps or not? ^^;;;;;;; *forgot*

[juusuikan]

Haha I did no ^^; Yet, that is.

[sarcasm_chan]

but how can you understand it then? XDD it's actually a quite complicated story XDD

[juusuikan]

Who said I understood XD?
Actually, when I finished it, I pretty much understood this chapter. I can read behind the story, on worries ^^//

However.. Hun, you know. The more I read your writings, the more I wanna write with you a story X'D;

[sarcasm_chan]

whahah well what you think it's all about then? cause even some of the usual readers don't get it completely XDDD

whoah I am flattered, would like to write something with you once X3

[juusuikan]

If you explain me the question? XD If its something you are trying to tell to them, naturally they wont get it.

Thank you. Though.. I can't write well enough X'D,

[sarcasm_chan]

*grin* I just meant: cause you did not read teh other chaps: how can you understand who is who and why they're there for what reason? XDD;; more like that...
and well this chapter actually amde some things clear... ^^; Aois past was unknown before this, and that was quite vague, stuff like that XDD;;

course you can ._. I read some of your stuff and I liked it X3

[juusuikan]

Well.. have I ever misundrstood your stories XD ? I pretty much understood with my own imagination. I hope I didn't mess up few things. If I get confused in the future, I'll find a place that talks about it and reread. ^^
Aoi is a key to the story, correct?

Awwe.. Well.. I might be able to describe few things but I surely cant write dialoges.. like you can, obviously X'D

[sarcasm_chan]

......no Aoi isn't teh head character...one of more XD;;;
Now I truly wonder what you think the story is about! XD please tell me then I can say what's right and what's wrong ^^;

well, tehn we put it together! My speciality (if I may be so arrogant) are dialogues, yours is describing! XD

[juusuikan]

I have no idea.

Yup, that's the point I was getting at XD!

[sarcasm_chan]

lol, must be confusing then XD;

^^ what do you want to write about then? X3

[juusuikan]

Haha yeah ^^;;

At the moment I'm clueless. Any ideas? We can search for them over the msn actuall ^^// Just note me.

[sarcasm_chan]

lol I still don't get why you read something... you don't get XDDD;;

ah ok I will ^^ but not now ok? being busy with manythings and 5 conversations already X.x *dies*

[juusuikan]

I just like the writing.

Hn, I'm fine later too ^^ Just remind me, ne.