Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-?x?-chap 3/?

[sarcasm_chan]

hey there,
here is a new chap of my new fic ^^ Sorry for taking such a long time, and please: ignore the weird chaptertitle thingy XD;;;;
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!

!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english is not my mother-tongue..
pairings: ?x

Comments

[yomi_chan]

Oh my, oh my ... Shou and Reita fighting ... *shakes head*
But well, Shou insulted Reita, so I can understand him.
Well whatever.
First it was a bit confusing for me to get into it again, but I managed and enjoy the chapter as well as I do every time ^-^
(Don't even DARE to say, that it's crappy >>)
And since I love the middle age, I definitely love the plot and the 'actors' *hahaha*
Keep on writing my dear <3
*gives you cookies and a piece of the strawberry cake I made*

[sarcasm_chan]

yummie! Cookies AND strawberry cake =D *munch munch*

I am very happy you liked it, despite my opinion about it that I won't say out loud cause you'll kill me >D
(I suddenly have the feeling my life won't last much longer after you read this)

I will! As soon as I know how to continue part 4, I will continue part 4!
(that quite makes sense right?I already wrote half of it btw...but now I am a bit out of ideas...suggestions?)

[yomi_chan]

*hihi*

*sigh*
Whatever, but I still like your work, even if there are some mistakes, but they don't catch someone's eye that badly and I think, your style did improved a bit. ^^
(*ehehehehe* >_>)

*nod* Makes sense.
(Hm ... we could make that shaking-words-out thingy again >DDDD)

[sarcasm_chan]

My style improved? what you mean? ^^ (nice to hear, but just mean; what did improve ^^;;)

"(Hm ... we could make that shaking-words-out thingy again >DDDD)"
O.O;;; I guess my memory fails me again this time, but I have actually no idea what ya mean T^T ^^;;

[yomi_chan]

Well ... you write somehow catchier ... okay, it may be, because I'm reading about drug intake and prostitution all the time, so it's quite a change, but I do think, that you use better sounding words ^^
(I hope you get what I mean X.x)

*hahaha*
I'll tell you at MSN, kay?