Marbles Lost and Found [oneshot]

Aug 29, 2014 19:45


Title: Marbles Lost and Found

Pairing: HPDM

Rating: PG13

Wordcount: ~5,500

Warnings: AU [wartime, Draco staying with the Order at Grimmauld Place], fluff, Kreacher

Disclaimer: I don’t own Harry Potter but I have a kettle and a toaster, so everything’s going to be JUST FINE.

Summary: All Draco wanted was a cup of tea. Now he has to find out what Potter is ( Read more... )

fiction, h/d

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femme_fragile August 29 2014, 21:02:02 UTC


thanks for saving my day - again.

today really sucked and I couldn´t wait to cuddle up in my bed and read your new fic, cause I knew it would cheer me up.

it worked wonderfully.

once again you narrate draco´s pov so funny, smart and touching. i just love him in this fic.
the way he thinks about his borrowed sweater, they way he adores harry - so really over the top, that only a real author like you could frame that right, the way he is scared of kreacher ( and i understand him so well, kreacher would scare me to death, if i had to face him ;)

I love, that harry waited to kiss draco, to show him, that he doesn´t want to hide his affection for him and how he jumps up the stairs.

I loved marbles when I was a child, just today I told a friend over coffee of my green and blue marbles. I would have loved to have a mood marble - it´s a brilliant idea! and the red is so much more touching as it stays unspoken.

as i always say, i am not sure of many things, but i truly believe in your writing talent. you had such a hard time, the last couple of months and of course you can´t continue writing in such bad times, but that doesn´t mean, that your talent has left you. that will never happen. i don´t write fictional texts, but with my political texts and essays i often feared, when i was really down, that i couldn´t pull it off again, but in the end i suprised my self, that i could still write.

the quote of your friend that spoke so disrespectful of your writing and didn´t believe in your dreams, made me soo angry. (but i better stop now, before i start an endless rant about it) you will achieve everything, you wish and you will get your swimming pool with fish.

*so once again: thank you so much*

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saras_girl September 2 2014, 19:53:27 UTC
I am very happy to have saved your today, although I'm sorry it sucked so much *hugs*

I love writing Draco's POV. His thoughts amuse me. I'm pleased that you like him and all his strangeness. I always thought Kreacher was creepy, all that wanting to have his head on the wall when he died and stuff O.o

Marbles are wonderful. I have lots and Marie buys me a new one whenever we visit a new place. Green and blue ones are great because they look peacock-esque. I would love a mood marble. I think it would be a very useful thing.

The last few months have definitely been challenging and I am so happy to be writing again - it never feels right when I'm not. I definitely worried that I might have lost the ability so it's very nice to hear that you think I've still got it!

I'm still pretty cross about that mean remark but it makes me feel better to think that it's not just me, I'm not just being insensitive. Anyway, when I get my swimming pool and my fish pond you can come round and swim and she can't! Ha!

*more hugs*

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