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geojitmal in saranghalee

Hold me

Jun 16, 2009 02:34

Title: Hold me
Author: Geojitmal
Rating: PG
Word count: 842
Pairings: GTOP
Genre: Flangst ^^
Summary: Someone works too much and vents his anger on his lover.
Diclaimer: All mine. Not.
A/N: Eh...dunno, had this unfinished on my desktop and now it's half past two in the morning and I got the (not-so) brilliant idea to finish it, lol. Don't like ( Read more... )

length: drabble, pairing: gtop, rating: g-pg

Comments 21

yao_chan June 16 2009, 01:01:54 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was sooooo cute! I can see that totally happening to Jiyong for real, and it kinda scares me to know that they're so stressed behind closed doors but yet still smiles for us fans. This was short and sweet....I love it. YOu did a wonderful job.

Thanks for sharing! <3<3<3<3

geojitmal June 16 2009, 08:52:15 UTC

Thank you! :D

vaneszikkipower August 4 2009, 20:54:28 UTC

Exactly what i wanted to say.
Amazing work as usual.

no_genre June 16 2009, 02:27:13 UTC

spot

no_genre June 16 2009, 21:53:29 UTC

srry i'm late D:

ji getting stressed out and breaking down makes my heart ache
boy shouldn't push himself too much
and ppl shouldn't put so much pressure on him
he will eventually break......

i'm glad seunghyun is there to take care of him
love the fact that he has the guts to arrange a day off for ji
& turn off their alarm clock
b/c i can just imagine how hysterical ji would be
waking up late

this is not far from being reality
excluding the GTOP, which i would love to be true
seeing ji recently makes me sad, he seems so tired, sad......

loved it :D
it was just beautiful

geojitmal June 17 2009, 19:54:53 UTC

I wouldn't mind the DTOP being reality, either ;D

Thank you! ^-^

geojitmal June 17 2009, 19:55:32 UTC

Lol, it's GTOP of course XD

dalpaengi June 16 2009, 02:39:26 UTC

*wibbles* :< This could so happen. Poor baby ji ;-; At least top took care of him

geojitmal June 16 2009, 08:52:59 UTC

Yeah, poor Ji indeed. ._.

dalpaengi June 16 2009, 11:23:39 UTC

....but this was really well written/very concise. I could see it all play out in my head :3 sequel? or stand alone? :[

geojitmal June 17 2009, 19:57:05 UTC

Thank you :)
Stand alone I'm afraid, I'm not good with sequels and chaptered stuff. ^^ Posted a prologue to a fic ages ago and still didn't get around to continue it, lol.

lishengshun June 16 2009, 03:02:55 UTC

T//T That's so cuteeee...only if life was so beautiful like that.

geojitmal June 16 2009, 08:53:42 UTC

Yeah, that'd be too awesome ^^ Thanks for commenting ^^

minky_ccl June 16 2009, 03:25:18 UTC

it's so sweet to see that Seunghyun is taking such good care of Ji. Really heartwarming. ♥

geojitmal June 16 2009, 08:54:14 UTC

I know~ =3 Thanks for commenting. ^^