Original Fic: She Wore A Blue Ribbon

[sarahyyy]

Since I am submiting this for a magazine, I thought to post it to see what kind of reactions (*wink nudge* you know to leave a comment when you read this, seriously) I would get. =D It started out as part of my procrastination, a Dramione actually, and then I turned it into my assignment. Talk about lazy... =D

Be nice, my dear, dear friends. I

Comments

[stardustii]

ohmygosh. i loved it so, SO much.
and you know what? i was going to copy and italicize all the parts i LOVED but then like, i liked too many parts and there were so many parts that were so poetic and lovely and yeah. <3333333
i loveeeee it. lovelovelove.

[sarahyyy]

Hahaha. This comment made me grin like an idiot. And now everyone's looking at me like I'm some sort of crazy person. =DDDDDDDDDD THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

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Just as a survey though (because honestly, your comment already has me up in the air), which part was your favourite?

[stardustii]

hehe. i'm just telling the truth :)

okay. so i was kind of like, "i think i know what's going on" and i love the way you wrote this part:

“My father sent me over to make sure that you were happy. Now that you are, he says it’s time for us to leave.” Joanna’s eyes were fixed onto her shoes, not wanting to look Hyacinth in the eye.

“I… I don’t understand.” And truly, she didn’t.

Joanna didn’t answer her, but just wrapped her small arms around Hyacinth and said, “I’ll miss you…” Her voice was muffled by her silent crying and Hyacinth’s hair.

Hyacinth thought she heard Joanna say “mum”, but she was sure it was just a figment of her imagination.

…wasn’t it?

especially teh part where Joanna and Hyacinth are like, hugging and yeah and the "mum" . i was like. O___________O sldkfjlkdf ♥

and then this:
...for she had never noticed that the colour of the ribbon was that of her own eyes. HERE I WAS LIKE CRYCRYCRY TOO POETIC AND BEAUTIFUL and the ending is always like the most important and it was developed so well so that i was

[stardustii]

okay. so. um. that ^ was me :DD

[sarahyyy]

I ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ you and your comments. They always make me giggle and chuckle and all in all look like a mad woman. =DDD

Lol, I'm glad you liked the ending. I originally thought that I overdid it. =D

[stardustii]

yay! :DDDDD
being a mad woman is a good thing! :D

nooo it was perfecttt.
and i loved itt :D

[sarahyyy]

Alright, alright. Now end the compliments before I start flying out of my house. =DDD

Being a mad woman is a good thing. =D

[stardustii]

s;dlfjsl;dk. BUT ITS SO GOOD I CAN'T HELP IT T_T

we have seen the light XD

[sarahyyy]

=DDDDDDD

Now I'm flying. If you see any reports on the news of mysterious flying girl, that's me. =D

took us long enough =D

[stardustii]

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oh look!
I JUST SAW YOU ON THE NEWS!!

[sarahyyy]

=DDDDD

I AM FAMOUS! WOO HOO!