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Ficathon: Every Darkest Sky, 1/6 plus epilogue (Teen)

Nov 07, 2011 21:26

TITLE: Every Darkest Sky
CHARACTERS: Maria, Rani, Mrs Wormwood, Jack + Torchwood Three, (name redacted for spoilers)
RATING: Teen (disturbing situations, offscreen death, aliens taking over)
WORD COUNT: 25443 all in. 4828 this chapter.
SPOILERS: Goes AU just before the end of Invasion of the BaneSUMMARY: For the End of SJA Ficathon - This is a ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

katie_9918 November 7 2011, 22:45:53 UTC

Very interesting!

Heartbreaking, considering no Sarah Jane, but I like how Maria's kept her head even without her around.

Can't wait to see how things between Maria, Rani, and Nathan develop!

wild_force71 November 8 2011, 08:24:10 UTC

Hee, thank you! More to come very soon...

marzipanilla November 7 2011, 23:43:19 UTC

Love what you've set up here. Interesting to see who's left to answer Mr Smith's call. (I'll also be in staunch denial about a dead Sarah until her body shows up)

wild_force71 November 8 2011, 08:37:56 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

(says nothing about Sarah's body or lack of...)

sailorptah November 8 2011, 14:05:37 UTC

Wow, that got dark in a hurry. I love the notion of a Maria-Rani team-up, and the way Maria's getting the hang of managing alt!Luke. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

wild_force71 November 8 2011, 18:26:29 UTC

I kind of wanted to push it as dark as I could while still being recognizably SJA - I didn't want to dump them into Torchwood, or anything. I'm glad you're enjoying!

petitfilou November 8 2011, 17:52:50 UTC

This is a really good, bittersweet start. And you teamed up Rani and Maria! I'm a bit worried for poor Clyde and count me as another person in total denial about Sarah Jane's death. Though putting them all in her house was a nicely cruel touch.

I love the little details you've put in for all the characters, Rani's usual teasing turned all aggressive, Maria's bravery and patience (and she can get on tables herself!), and the little ways Luke Nathan subverts his orders. Definitely going to follow this.

wild_force71 November 8 2011, 18:25:20 UTC

You'll find out about Clyde. Still saying nothing about Sarah Jane. :D

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the comment. Next chapter tomorrow.

I like your icon. Is that Lis?

firstlady1408 November 8 2011, 23:00:10 UTC

Love the teaming up of Rani and Maria. Also the AU version of Luke/Nathan. Looking forward to more