Sarah/Various

Jul 24, 2009 04:11


It's 4 in the morning here and I swear this makes sense in my head now, if it's gobbledegook please feel free to tell me. Otherwise enjoy :)

Title: Copper Sweets
Rating: PG (Good lord I've written something clean!)
Pairing: Various (although if you've read my stuff before I'm sure you can guess one of them :)
Length: 825

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sarah/harry, sarah/doctor

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darklioness82 July 24 2009, 10:22:23 UTC
Oh my, how beautiful and sad! It definately makes sense and how inventive to have Andrea as SJ's first love and making the connection with Wormwood's red hair. I love how you've woven her experiences at Uni, and with the Doctor and Harry into her history too.

My favourite line: "They never leave her completely. She had the Doctor’s dog and Harry’s ring and Mrs Wormwood’s child and a life that Andrea might have lived."

I always get excited at seeing a fic from you! Thanks for writing it!

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duckface666 July 25 2009, 16:30:43 UTC
I think I'm projecting my own love of red hair onto Sarah Jane, lol
Thanks so much for the review, it's always nice to know someone's reading :)

I'm glad you like that line by the way, it was actually the first thing that came to me and I made a story around it, which I don't normally do, I just had this thought of a ring as a symbol of marriage and a dog and a child, sort of symbolic of a normal life - all a normal life that Andrea could lead. I think that was why I was worried about the whole thing sounding barmy on page!

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sarah_jane_s July 24 2009, 14:11:02 UTC
Squeeeeeeeeee how totally adorable! I want to hug you *hugs* there.

Love the bit about Harry's ring, awww I miss him so much! Love it all in fact hehe well done, I really enjoyed it.

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duckface666 July 25 2009, 16:32:35 UTC
Awwww, thanks for the hug!
Harry was before my time, I know really little about him but I think he sounds awesome from all I know of him.

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sailorptah July 25 2009, 14:04:00 UTC
Oh, wow.

This was gorgeous. It hurt, but it was gorgeous. Love your deft hand with language, and the imagery.

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duckface666 July 25 2009, 16:35:58 UTC
Thank you so much :) *blushes a little*

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kowarth July 26 2009, 09:35:44 UTC
beautiful, simply beautiful,

congratulations :)

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minerva_fan July 27 2009, 10:32:42 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous prose. Well done.

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