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atfm in sara_sofia

Halloween Fic

Oct 31, 2007 10:49

Title: Once Upon A Midnight Dreary
Summary: Halloween in Las Vegas.
Disclaimer: CSI and its characters are the property of Jerry Bruckheimer and CBS. "The Raven" belongs to Edgar Allan Poe. (Or his descendants. Or some greedy publishing house.) No infringement intended.
Author's Note: Thanks to darandkerry for the beta ( Read more... )

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atfm October 31 2007, 19:58:54 UTC

It has become popular here in recent years, so maybe it'll sweep over to Poland soon, too. We didn't have a lot of trick-or-treaters, so I've been eating a lot of the sweets myself. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

madfoxzz November 1 2007, 04:54:37 UTC

Nice work! Nice and creepy but with the reality flavor we expect from CSI. I liked their interactions. I thought perhaps you were going to reveal an animal that had snuck in while they were occupied with the trick-or-treaters. The dude at the end kinda makes me think of Grissom without any real reason to think so...

atfm November 1 2007, 07:51:39 UTC

Thank you. :) I had considered an animal, but it had to be something a little creepier. Perhaps there IS a reason to think it's Grissom...

s0phi4 November 1 2007, 11:27:56 UTC

Loved it! Didn't see the ending coming, good twist there.

atfm November 1 2007, 12:10:29 UTC

Hey, glad you liked it, especially the ending. :)

half_life33 November 1 2007, 19:30:56 UTC

whooa i thought grissom too
lol
prolly a stalker

atfm November 1 2007, 23:00:05 UTC

If several people think so, there must be something to it, right? :)

sophie_lover November 2 2007, 07:06:08 UTC

This was sweet and lovely yet at the same scary and creepy!! Luv the image of Sofia "lolled comfortably in the armchair, her legs dangling over the side and her head resting against the back" eating candy... so yum!! The end totally creeped me out! Great job!!

atfm November 2 2007, 07:53:11 UTC

Good to know I managed to strike that balance. Thanks. :)