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[coldbeer]

Title: Picking Up
Author: Isis de Jong
Rating: It's as tame as these girls will get.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Likely never will be.
Author’s notes: Happy birthday, bohemian_lover. Part 1 is here.
Spoilers: Only if a combination of 'Grissom' and 'sabbatical' is completely new to you.
Summary: Grissom says hi.

Comments

[ralst]

This is a really intriguing story. I'm really enjoying the interplay between the characters and the not-quite-knowing what's going on. Looking forward to 3, 4, 5 and beyond.

[coldbeer]

Thank you very much, that's really nice to hear.

[nixie_noo]

this has been a great read so far :) can't wait to read more!!

[coldbeer]

Thank you - I aim to please. ;)

[acid_burns]

I cannot wait for more.

[coldbeer]

... you don't have to. Posted. ;)

[snuffnyc]

again, great chapter. i like the way sara just picks up mid-thought with "imagaine you have this friend..." It works, it sounds like her, and it lends that air of familiarity to the two of them.

anyhow, good job, i'll be looking for the next part!

[coldbeer]

Thank you for telling me what works. Next part's up. :)

[coldbeer]

Thank you for commenting, and I love hearing that you feel it's in character. Writing Sofia's still very new, so I'm still just finding out what works for her. :)