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_elvie September 20 2007, 01:30:22 UTC
OK, I'm in the freezing cold of the Scottish highlands at 2 am yet I'm having to fan myself because whoa, the hotness! You write them so perfectly and you haven't even watched the whole series yet - amazing!
Seeing that you've written a new story always makes me squee because I know that it's going to be fantastic quality AND completely hot - fabulous! :D

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sara_merry99 September 20 2007, 01:57:41 UTC
Thanks *so* much!! I'm very very glad you liked it!

I've almost watched the whole series--I'm down to four episodes left (if I remember right). I hope to get back to watching in the next couple of weeks. My life should have settled down some by then (::fingers crossed::).

Thanks!!

Now I just need to get back int o the swing of *writing* again. (I wrote this one before everything went to hell around here.)

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spikedluv September 21 2007, 11:35:07 UTC
Oh my! *steams up windows* That was very hot. And emotionally satisfying. Love Chris noticing that Vin's not so good with a pistol and taking it upon himself to make sure he's not caught unprepared. I also love how the whole pistol bit is foreplay, and Vin's line at the end. *g*

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sara_merry99 September 21 2007, 14:24:22 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you saw it and glad you liked it! ::bounces::

Thanks so much!!

(How are you feeling? Better? You seem to be around a bit more lately, that's good right?)

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aukestrel September 21 2007, 12:49:59 UTC
I had marked this to read when I had time - well, I'm PMSsing and even though I'm at work, damn it, it's time!

Wow. The tension building is excellent. Two things I REALLY loved: Vin grabbing his gunbelt but not his clothes - HA! Of course! and Chris not taking Vin in the dirt like an animal. God, that is SUCH a good Chris. Okay, three things - the way Chris grabbed Vin's arm and how Vin responded to it.

UNGH. I can has happy nao!

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sara_merry99 September 21 2007, 14:33:30 UTC
Yay so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it!

(But, okay, so how is it that I didn't know you were into Mag7? I have you filed in what passes for my brain under due South. Of course the fact that I like both should be a *hint* maybe that other folks do too. :D Does this mean you write them?? If so, where, please, are your stories??

What passes for my brain is sending me distressing signals that we've had this conversation before. ::headdesk::)

Anyway, I'm so very glad you liked it. And your three favorite things are kind of my three favorite things too, so *yay*!!

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seremela2 September 22 2007, 21:11:59 UTC
YES! *happy dance* a new story from you!!!

Hot, hot, hot, Sara, from the moment Chris walked away from Vin and Vin could only stare (heh, me too by the way, I was staring just as much), and the way Chris holds Vin to correct his aim, to the totally hot sex scenes.

As usual you made it all so real with the rich details you provide (how DO you know so much about shooting and the difference between shooting a gun and shooting a rifle or mare's leg?! I'm always deeply happy when details like that make an OW story so truly OW) - and with all the observations about their characters, as always right on the mark.

Like this one:

...Chris said with that confidence of his that was as exciting as hell one minute, infuriating as hell the next.

Makes me grin again.

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sara_merry99 September 24 2007, 16:06:15 UTC
Thanks so much!! I'm *so* glad you liked it!

I was pretty transfixed by the mental image of Chris in those tight pants myself, so I was happy to put that detail in.

(how DO you know so much about shooting and the difference between shooting a gun and shooting a rifle or mare's leg?!

I had a friend a few years back who was a total gun-nut and I went to the shooting range with him. So I've fired a shotgun (loud and kicks hard), a rifle, a sniper rifle (so much fun), a replica Sharps .50 buffalo hunting rifle (so loud it scared the shit out of me and I almost dropped it), a 9mm pistol and a bunch of other guns. The sniper rifle was my favorite. :D

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sfulton229 September 24 2007, 04:38:52 UTC
Wow, what a hot fic! Chris has a great method for tutoring. I'm sure VIn will be back for more lessons. Thanks for posting this.

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sara_merry99 September 24 2007, 16:06:48 UTC
Thanks so much!!

Yeah, I'd have learned so much more in school if I'd had lessons like this one. :D

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