Comments | sara_merry99: Fic: Tapestry (Riptide, N/C/M)

sara_merry99

Fic: Tapestry (Riptide, N/C/M)

Oct 26, 2006 09:44

Title: Tapestry
Author: Sara
Rating: NC-17, FRAO, No Pants
Fandom: Riptide
Pairing: Cody/Murray/Nick
Summary: A tapestry of desire. "He can't keep this up for long, but with Cody panting like that it's hard to stop."
Word Count: 2500 or so
Disclaimer: The guys aren't mine. Darn it.
Archiving: At the Double Your Pleasure Riptide Archive (please, ( Read more... )

story, riptide

Comments 21

elmyraemilie October 26 2006, 23:01:05 UTC

That is just so sweet. Lovely and warm.

sara_merry99 October 27 2006, 12:19:39 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

brienze October 27 2006, 06:05:15 UTC

Yummy. =)

sara_merry99 October 27 2006, 12:20:10 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

arouette October 29 2006, 05:18:28 UTC

My husband wants to know why I've spent the last couple of nights sleeping with an enormous grin on my face. What shall I tell him? After all, it's *all* *your* *fault*!!!!

sara_merry99 October 29 2006, 15:05:11 UTC

:) Tell hubby I wanted to make you happy, is all. :)

::hugs::

farad May 2 2007, 16:58:47 UTC

Yep - sweet. Love Nick, still - even here he's all brusque and direct and - perfectly Nick. Tender in his touches, 'manly' in his words.

I find it interesting that you have so much emotion between Cody and Murray - they're very aware of each other emotionally and with touch. In a way, Nick is kinda left out - but I'm not sure thathe's aware of it, if that makes any sense . . . .

Okay - on to - more! This is wonderful - and distracting me horribly from work!!!

sara_merry99 May 2 2007, 17:26:31 UTC

I find it interesting that you have so much emotion between Cody and Murray - they're very aware of each other emotionally and with touch. In a way, Nick is kinda left out - but I'm not sure thathe's aware of it, if that makes any sense . . . .

Huh!! That's an interesting observation and *not* something I'd ever thought of. Part of it is that Nick came in on Cody and Murray already together (in this story) so he's not quite as tangled up in their *current* lovemaking.

He's also just a little bit less, I think, empathic. Not a good word. I just don't think he's as emotionally *aware* as the others, in general, not just about this relationship that they're in.

Interesting to think about though....

farad May 3 2007, 03:24:15 UTC

Okay - I've now had the extremely great pleasure of reading "Pull of the Tides" and I'm commenting here because I think that . . . I can still see Nick feeling on the outside a little. Not in a bad way, not at all. But to revisit an earlier comment you made, Cody is so aware of his own sexuality and so accepting of it that it's easier for him to be the one that Murray, already sensitive by nature, would communicate better with him. The two of them would have (and do have) an awareness of subtleties that Nick, god love him, isn't. But with Cody and Murray together more intimately, I suspect that at some point, Nick would become aware of it. At first, he might be jealous, but I see him as being alittle more hurt by it, feeling left out.

it's funny because you did such a gorgeous job in "Pull of the Tide" with cody and boz being the jealous ones, hearing but not knowing exactly what was going on with Nick, and each of them worrying about the effect it was having on the other - and each of them questioning Nick! Poor Nicky!

sara_merry99 May 3 2007, 15:44:26 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you liked "Pull"! It seems a little long and windy to me, personally. Lord knows, I never intended for it to be a case story. But the boys needed something to *do* while they were sorting things out and giving them a case to solve kept them busy instead of just having them sit around and wallow in their heads like 14-year old girls.

I can still see Nick feeling on the outside a little. Not in a bad way, not at all. But to revisit an earlier comment you made, Cody is so aware of his own sexuality and so accepting of it that it's easier for him to be the one that Murray, already sensitive by nature, would communicate better with him. The two of them would have (and do have) an awareness of subtleties that Nick, god love him, isn't. But with Cody and Murray together more intimately, I suspect that at some point, Nick would become aware of it. At first, he might be jealous, but I see him as being alittle more hurt by it, feeling left out.Hmmm...well...wow! I'd never thought of that, and I'd been wanting to explore that ( ... )

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tinx_r August 7 2008, 21:48:19 UTC

Huh, and I've read this one about 30 times. I really do suck. Your belated feedback, my dear:

What a beautiful, beautiful story. I love the little 'moments' in between the OMFG so hotness.

Love that it's still so new for them but the love's so strong. You strike that perfectly, IMHO, and it kinda doubles the hotness.

*HUGS*