Connect 4

[sapphire_child]

Title: Connect 4
Rating/warnings: G
Genre: future fic
Character/s: Hurley, Charlie
Spoilers: up to Something Nice Back Home
Summary: Charlie and Hurley play a game together at Santa Rosa.
Disclaimer: Lost isn’t mine. Now that my muse is back, expect a smattering of fics from me but probably nothing major. The show just isn’t doing all that much for

Comments

[falafel_musings]

I love the simplicity of the Connect 4 game and how Hurley has completely accepted Charlie's presense now and seems to enjoy his visits. I love how angry and frustrated Charlie is about Aaron (he should be!) It was interesting that Charlie watches out for Aaron for himself, not for Claire.

[falafel_musings]

BTW, you should enter this for the O6 fic challenge!

[sapphire_child]

*facepalm*

You are brilliant. How come I didn't think of that?

[sapphire_child]

I got the feeling from SNBH that he was only really happy when he was with Charlie. His therapy isn't doing him any good and Jack's visits don't do anything to perk him up but he seems to be clinging onto Charlie's visits which I think is sweet.

Is it bad that I want to see dbah!Charlie stalking Kate and Aaron like in "I'll Be Watching You"? Honest to God, that would make me squee for about a week.

[janie_tangerine]

That was really good! I loved how it was tied with the game. Dbah!Charlie looks pretty much like I imagine he would be right now and of course he's so cool that he beats the worldwide champion. Guess dbah!people do it better? ;) And it's always good to see those two together, dead matters regardless. Great job!

[sapphire_child]

Thanks Janie! It was such a short little scene but it was just begging to be writen. I'm glad you enjoyed it =)

[sapphire_child]

I love how these two just seem to flow when they're together so I'm pleased that relationship came across here. You're right, it is a bit like the backgammon game with Locke - great parallel there.

I get the feeling that if dbah!Charlie could change the Aaron situation he would but for some unknown reason he can't. Which kind of bugs me but whatever.

I really enjoyed writing this one - really - so I'm glad you liked reading it. Cheers Pace

[camille_moineau]

That was great! I liked the simplicity of the narrative, Charlie watching over Aaron, his anger and frustration over Claire and Kate. You've very nicely filled in one of the many blanks that TPTB would never think of filming.

Although, I have this image in my head of Charlie haunting Kate, doing things like banging out music on her piano (she *has* to have a piano in that lovely house that she doesn't deserve to live in).

[sapphire_child]

First off - omg you're using an icon I made *squee*

Now. Thank you so much for reading! I really, really enjoyed writing this so I'm very happy that you enjoyed reading it just as much ^_^

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[sapphire_child]

Although, I have this image in my head of Charlie haunting Kate, doing things like banging out music on her piano (she *has* to have a piano in that lovely house that she doesn't deserve to live in).

LMFAO. Somebody should write that as a fic. How awesome XD

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[camille_moineau]

"LMFAO. Somebody should write that as a fic. How awesome XD"

I'm thinking about it, actually. I just have to think of what comes after that image. *pets plotbunny*

*points to icon* Not the same fandom, I know, but I didn't want to repeat myself with the Charlie-icons, and I'm not really sure about your feelings for Desmond, so I picked this one. It still applies anyway, since he *is* working (on math, but working nonetheless).

Yeah. Um. I'll stop blathering now.:-)

[sapphire_child]

Cheers. I very much enjoyed writing this - love the Churley muchly ^_^

She's not appearing again til season 6 apparently. SIGH.