Unfinished Business

Apr 07, 2008 22:08

Title: Unfinished Business
Characters: Charlie
Spoilers: up to 4x01. Based on speculation only.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: He drifts between time and space, never really knowing where he’ll be next, not understanding why he’s still here or even what he is. And then one day he opens up the newspaper and discovers to his horror that while six of his ( Read more... )

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silvestra April 7 2008, 16:35:45 UTC
I liked this very much. I wish I had something more to say than this, but... Very well written, I like your Charlie. :)

(Lost S04 is fucking messed up! We're at Episode 04 here and oh my God.)

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sapphire_child April 8 2008, 01:10:39 UTC
Thank you!

Eggtown was a messed up episode generally. Don't worry, episode 5 is good but from there it goes bad again. God, when did Lost start sucking so badly?

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lucie_fanfix April 7 2008, 16:47:45 UTC
I love it. It's perfection. Charlie is just...gaaaahhhh. I don't even have the words.

And I now I miss Claire too. :(

What a wonderful fic.

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sapphire_child April 8 2008, 01:16:12 UTC
Thanks! =D

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blackcatinbree April 7 2008, 17:33:55 UTC
This is really good! Wonderfully written! I so hope this is what really happens to ghost!Charlie, and I hope even more that Claire is okay. (Gah, what happened to her being the only one who can raise Aaron??) Nicely done, Ellin. :D

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tellshannon815 April 7 2008, 21:12:13 UTC
That's why I'm wondering if something might happen to kate in the future because of that (future plot bunny maybe?)
Anyway, loved the fic!

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sapphire_child April 8 2008, 01:36:33 UTC
Thanks for r/ring! ^_^

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sapphire_child April 8 2008, 01:34:16 UTC
Joey!!! You're reading fic! Yayyyyy!

Thank you for reviewing ^_^

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sapphire_child April 8 2008, 01:39:35 UTC
The exhausted "Haven't I done enough" was funny. No Charlie, killing yourself for your friends was obviously not enough, because even your closest friends have forgotten about you already.

Poor Charlie =P I feel bad for him having to come back and finish what he started when all the people he left behind just forgot about him.

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mrslinus17 April 7 2008, 21:55:40 UTC
Loved it. Charlie is very 007 ;]

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sapphire_child April 8 2008, 01:40:09 UTC
Lol, yeah, with his sunnies XD

Cheers Molly.

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