The Paradox - Chapter Seven

[sapphire_child]

Comments

[mrslinus17]

Oh my god, I think that might have been my favourite yet. It was so sad, and very well written. I loved the idea that Charlie was writing a song that the other Charlie was getting in his head. i loved it all. I can't wait for more!

[falafel_fiction]

I'm glad you liked the song reference. According to Dom Charlie's torture song was supposed to show up again somewhere else but it never did. But we have it here!

[elliotsmelliot]

The drowning scene was really well done and it was clever to have this sever Charlie's connection to the island leaving him even more lost.

Another great chapter. You're not very nice leaving me hanging like this!

[sapphire_child]

You're not very nice leaving me hanging like this!

Hee. Well you can blame me for that because I was the one who divided these chapters up and I'm also the one who is abstaining from posting them ^_^

Come on, would it be any fun if the next chapter was right there waiting to be read? *cheeky grin*

Thanks for reading elliot!

[falafel_fiction]

Sorry to keep you waiting, ell. I hope the next chapter will prove to be worth the wait. After all our stringing along Penny might finally show up...oh yes!

[cylune9]

Charlie dying though Paradox!Charlie POV. So sad... sniff.

[sapphire_child]

Better late than never!

Well I figured since I left it on such a big cliffhanger there really needed to be a quick recap in case people needed to remember where they were up to.

Thanks Alix!