Save Yourself for Me 3/3

Jan 28, 2008 23:06


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kawaiispinel January 28 2008, 14:35:12 UTC
Eee! *claps* Bravo! That was fantastic! And just perfect.

“Falling in love with you was easy,” he explained slowly, “almost too easy. But trying to fall out of love with you - on purpose?” he shook his head. “That was next to impossible.”

I wibbled so hard at this bit.

Lovely work, you two. I bow before your amazingness. *bows*

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sapphire_child January 28 2008, 14:48:43 UTC
That was my line! Eeeeee! I wrote that line before I did most of the rest of the fic, it was a big part of my inspiration for all the C/C ness (not that I need more inspiration for C/C but whatever). Yes. I love that line too! *is a dork*

Yay! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this - until recently I wasn't even sure if I would get it posted at all but then Pace came to my rescue for which I am eternally grateful. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

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elliotsmelliot January 28 2008, 15:17:55 UTC
Aw, the little family is reunited. You really kept the suspense up the entire time. I was especially getting nervous for Desmond at the end because I so do not trust Juliet. Well done. I can't tell which section was written by which author because your styles flow together so well.

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sapphire_child January 28 2008, 15:29:49 UTC
I was especially getting nervous for Desmond at the end because I so do not trust Juliet. - don't worry, when I first read that bit (Pacey wrote it) I was nervous! And I knew how it all ended!

I can't tell which section was written by which author because your styles flow together so well. - this is the fifth fanfiction that Pace and I have written together now so we can match each other up pretty well when we're ficcing together. We're actually collaborating on a new monster AU fic at the moment with falafel_fiction too. That's going to be ten shades of awesome.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review as always! Cheers elliot =)

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elliotsmelliot January 28 2008, 15:37:19 UTC
Fafalel just sent me the trailer you made for the new story. It looks awesome. The clips you selected and how you edited everything makes it look real, like this is what I should be watching on Thursday! I especially liked the new writing on Charlie's hand at the end. Way to build the buzz!

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sapphire_child January 29 2008, 01:03:17 UTC
I'm very proud of it - I haven't vidded in a very, very long time and I'm so pleased with how it turned out. I'm stoked you like it too! Once I've downloaded the Moth and Homecoming I'll probably make a full length trailer for when we start posting it in earnest.

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summerrrain January 28 2008, 15:30:21 UTC
Awww the ending to this fic was just perfect! This idea was just so original and flowed so well that I was on the edge of my seat. The Charlie/Claire bits were just beautiful, and I almost teared up a bit, especially at the scene before they started to escape. And the Des and Juliet parts were awesome as well! You two did a brilliantly amazing job, and I just love it when you write together. Fantastic job! :)

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sapphire_child January 29 2008, 01:29:31 UTC
The Charlie/Claire was my basic premise for this and Pace's stuff just complemented it so incredibly well.

We're actually co-authoring again at the moment with falafel_fiction so keep a weather eye out over the next few months when we start posting that =)

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sapphire_child January 29 2008, 01:36:02 UTC
Definite credit to Pacey for Juliet - she did a brilliant job with her.

And don't you worry, we're writing together again now with falafel_fiction too!

Cheers Hannah

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falafel_fiction January 28 2008, 23:00:00 UTC
Awesome! Well first off any fic where Charlie/Claire are allowed to have a proper grown up relationship is made of win. It's what we all wanted, stupid writers.

Loved Charlie being credited for being able to take a beating. Too true. He's the island Rocky.

Lastly; Desmond/Juliet? Surprisingly cool character combination. I loved Juliet's line about selling magazine subscriptions. Heh! You know, if they hadn't lumped her with the love triangle I could've been a Juliet fan. Even though I don't trust her as far as I could throw her. Oh and all your ideas about the Others studying pre-cognitive capabities - excellent!

Great work, guys!

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sapphire_child January 29 2008, 01:39:32 UTC
any fic where Charlie/Claire are allowed to have a proper grown up relationship is made of win. It's what we all wanted, stupid writers. - hear hear!

Loved Charlie being credited for being able to take a beating. Too true. He's the island Rocky. - well I mean for goodness sake, the amount of times he's been beaten up (or had wounds melted shut with gunpowder) he deserves some recognition!

Cheers cappy! I can't wait to finish off my bits for The Paradox! I so want to repost the prologue bit with the trailer, like, RIGHT NOW but I think I'd better wait a bit because I have been seriously spamming everyone's f-lists with fic lately =P

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