Comments | sapphire_child: Claire - Anatomy of a Plane Crash

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Claire - Anatomy of a Plane Crash

Dec 09, 2007 11:27

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meagan4dominic December 9 2007, 03:23:17 UTC

That was AWESOME! If this were a real book & that was the opening chapter I would read the rest of that book in like a day, that was such an awesome ending & the whole thing was just great. I really loved how you added Arzt in & I have to admit I did giggle at 'Later I would realise that the true, far more embarrassing reason, was that I had wet myself as the plane went down'

sapphire_child December 9 2007, 12:54:15 UTC

Goddamn, I might just have to write some more of this then!

Arzt actually did help Claire with her bag, you see it in the S1 season finale. I liked having him trying to interact with Claire and be all smart and she's just like "GO AWAY PLZTHX"

Poor Claire. Can you imagine how mortified you'd be?

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sapphire_child December 9 2007, 12:59:13 UTC

Well it's through explanatory bits as well as diary entries so...maybe I will write some more! ^_^ I can't do the whole bizzo or I'll die but hell, a little more couldn't hurt.

elliotsmelliot December 9 2007, 05:27:11 UTC

I wondered if that was Arzt! This was really scary and suspenseful.

sapphire_child December 9 2007, 13:12:40 UTC

I had to seat him next to her having watched Claire getting on the plane and him helping her back in S1. I reckon they would've had an interesting dynamic together.

Thank you! Pace is trying to convince me to write more of this, so I might have to do just that!

falafel_fiction December 9 2007, 09:16:31 UTC

Yay! Arzt! He was sitting next to Claire, wasn't he? I love how she kept pretending to be asleep so she didn't have to talk to him. Awww, poor Arzt.

Any chance you could...write the whole book?! *cheeky grin*

sapphire_child December 9 2007, 13:20:23 UTC

He certainly was. Or at least, he helped her with getting her bag into the overhead locker.

Poor Claire, she was just feeling a little bit fragile and not at all like talking to strange men. Although she's like that most of the time so...! I'm so mean.

LOL. Maybe. It's meant to be written through explanatory bits and diary entries so I might write a little bit more. I'd like to write Hurleys foreword at some point too - that'd be fun I think ^_^

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sapphire_child December 10 2007, 04:36:33 UTC

I'm writing at least a little bit more on this so don't panic =)