Desmond!fic - Save One, Lose Another

Dec 07, 2007 10:10

Title: Save One, Lose Another
Character/s: Desmond, Charlie
Spoilers: up to Flashes Before Your Eyes
Summary: AU. Desmond saved Claire from drowning so that Charlie wouldn’t go in. What he didn’t bank on was what happened next...
Disclaimer: Clearly this never happened on the show - thus why FANfiction! Cheers.

You can’t change fate. )

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fated_darkness December 7 2007, 02:28:21 UTC
I need to stop reading sad things. Ever since the "fred" incident in Deathly Hallows, I can't read even relatively sad stuff without bawling.

Did you har that on the Lost Season 4 trailors that they're playing in movie theaters has a brief flash of Charlie in them?

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sapphire_child December 9 2007, 01:24:53 UTC
I need to stop re-watching GH and TTLG andcrying my eyes out. After four times it surely can't be classified as healthy grieving anymore =P

Yes I did. Cheers for telling me though =)

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sapphire_child December 9 2007, 01:42:45 UTC
I never wanted either of them to die - my muse is just an evil psychotic bitch who likes making people cry is all =P

Cheers Pace. Hey, guess what fic I'm posting today? My excerpt from "Anatomy of a Plane Crash"! And I've expanded on and have started writing my season four AU where Claire and Charlie are in the medical station together! *happy bounce*

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meagan4dominic December 7 2007, 05:22:34 UTC
Aww that was so good, I always love your angst but ZOMG poor Aaron & Charlie, but mostly Aaron! & Des, aww I can't imagine how guilty Des would feel after all of this. This was a good twist of events, well done!

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sapphire_child December 9 2007, 02:11:33 UTC
Hopefully one day I'll write fluff again. But it is certainly not this day.

Cheers Meags ^_^

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meagan4dominic December 9 2007, 02:21:10 UTC
Whether you're writing angst or fluff, as long as you keep writing I'll be happy

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falafel_fiction December 7 2007, 10:45:59 UTC
You are still the Queen of the mega-angst deathfic, my dear! It was actually rather chilling to read all those technical definitions of drowning. I had no idea that you could die after a near miss. TBH I think Claire dying would be a fate worse than death for poor Charlie. This line was wrenching, but very poetic...

after a few empty words were spoken, they imprisoned her beauty forever within the salted dust

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sapphire_child December 9 2007, 02:41:53 UTC
Nothing beats "Nameless Child" though. I killed ALL of my OTP in that, as well as Locke. *is evil*

Neither did I. That's why I researched it ages ago, to see if Claire could have possibly died from complications afterwards.

Mmmn, that was my favourite line. Love it! Cheers Cappy dear, I'm just posting my next fic, I hope you enjoy that one too =)

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babydazzle December 8 2007, 18:11:15 UTC
sapphire_child December 9 2007, 02:49:19 UTC
Thank you Baby =)

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