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sap1066

Five And A Half Hours Later: Technical Note

Jun 03, 2007 20:58

Chapter 11: Technical Note
This just makes Chapter 12 possible. I know it's hard to understand already.

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littlemadame June 3 2007, 21:35:22 UTC

Thank you for reposting this, it does make sense, and it is beautiful and touching. Well done! I can't wait for the rest now !

sap1066 June 5 2007, 19:33:08 UTC

Really? Nobody understood it the first time round so I had another go at explaining it in the first chapter of 5.5+. Lovely icon btw.

xxshebeexx June 4 2007, 18:44:23 UTC

Oh, that's so beautiful! It does make sense, when you read it carefully! :) I'm so excited about the next part now - there's hope for them at last!

sap1066 June 5 2007, 19:34:02 UTC

Not a whole lot of sense, I admit. Thanks for commenting anyway, I appreciate the support.

geordie_chick June 13 2007, 19:51:05 UTC

Brilliant, very clever and completely understood. It could have been a bit difficult but it makes total sense in relation to the other chapters. I can't wait for the next one.

P.S. xxshebeexx - I love your icon, what a gorgeous Nine pic :)

sap1066 June 14 2007, 18:42:43 UTC

Really? Glad you understood it, I don't think many people did. I stopped writing for a bit after that.

sanguineheroine June 19 2007, 13:42:30 UTC

Okay wow. That made things clear enough for me to understand how clever you are.

Brilliant, beautiful story.

sap1066 June 19 2007, 19:25:11 UTC

Ah, but not clear enough for you to understand. I did say it was complicated. The sequel is disappointing though, and I shouldn't bother with it.

Huh? clarice_cat July 24 2007, 07:01:28 UTC

I am so confused...

I'm sure it makes sense, it just so happens to be making the kind of sense that is not to my brain.

I'm gonna read, like, the last, oh, eleven chapters over again and see if repetition can make my brain less "squishy."

Either way, love this. Loved Rose (though I kinda agreed with the Tardis for a while and just wanted to throttle her) and Nine is written so lovely-ly... that really doesn't sound right, does it? And I love your TARDIS. She's fabulous and just the right shade of superior. :)

Anyhoo, I'm off to reread. Wish me luck.