Atobe, sitting amidst his teammates, one leg crossed aristocratically over the other, raised a carefully-tended eyebrow. "As had I, Mizuki-kun. But one gets used to disappointment."
Ahahahahahahahahahah, I loved this line.
"You’d do Yuuta’s whole family if they’d let you."
Oh man, he probably would.
"Are you still upset that I wouldn’t play you yesterday?" Atobe continued, stroking the inside of Mizuki’s wrist with his thumb. "Are you really such a sore loser before you even lose?"
Hahahaha! The dialog really is great here.
An awesome fic! I loved the interactions and Atobe and Mizuki failing and your descriptions were just enough to be vivid. Really, great job!
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Ahahahahahahahahahah, I loved this line.
"You’d do Yuuta’s whole family if they’d let you."
Oh man, he probably would.
"Are you still upset that I wouldn’t play you yesterday?" Atobe continued, stroking the inside of Mizuki’s wrist with his thumb. "Are you really such a sore loser before you even lose?"
Hahahaha! The dialog really is great here.
An awesome fic! I loved the interactions and Atobe and Mizuki failing and your descriptions were just enough to be vivid. Really, great job!
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The start with Yanagisawa was also priceless. I couldn't help grinning the whole time.
"You’d do Yuuta’s whole family if they’d let you."
Haha, I loved this line. So true.
Really, thank you very much for writing this! I loved it. :D
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One million kinds of love for this line.
Fantastic story! I really like the tone and the Trials of Mizuki made me laugh and cry. Atsushi's remarks throughout filled me with joy also.
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I also loved this: "If you could just jerk off in your room like a normal person, you wouldn’t have had this problem." xD
Very funny! Nice work, anon! ♥
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