I don't know where to begin. xDD I loved this! The snark between them, Ryoma's never-ending quest for White Cherry Ginger Smile Tea (and the anti-climatic way that ended), Ryoma's billboard... the relationship dynamic between them is perfect. Ryoma's frustration with Atobe's focus on business, his attempt to recall their tennis-centered relationship... ♥ It was brilliant.
Ngk. I ADORED how Ryoma bugged and bugged and bugged for tennis until they touched each other everywhere because yes. That's the way it is. <333 And I think your style is so perfect for this fic because it totally enhances the characterisation and flow.
You make me so nostalgic.doingfirstDecember 2 2008, 10:13:48 UTC
oh my god this was HILARIOUS and AMAZING. *squirms with glee* Anon-san, you are a genius among fic writers. Your humour and wit interspersed with awesome Seigaku times has made my day. Momo and his girlfriend of course are the stars. :DDD
*showers you with love White Chery Ginger Smile Tea*
fjadl;kfe this was AWESOME!! So funny and cute and very in-character. :) A lot of things in this fic made me laugh, but I think what randomly made me laugh the hardest was: "I was never a child." FUCKING DEAD, I don't even know why that's so funny except OH ATOBE, I LOVE HOW SERIOUSLY YOU TAKE YOURSELF. ♥
And another really hilarious part: "This is where Momoshiro bolted," Atobe murmurs, mouth against Ryoma's ear. HAHAHA SO PERFECT. Really, all the Momo stuff was perfect. It made me laugh so hard. xD
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Thank you!
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Thanks so much for writing!
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Thank you so much for writing!
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*showers you with love White Chery Ginger Smile Tea*
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And another really hilarious part: "This is where Momoshiro bolted," Atobe murmurs, mouth against Ryoma's ear. HAHAHA SO PERFECT. Really, all the Momo stuff was perfect. It made me laugh so hard. xD
Great fic, anon! Thanks for sharing it! ♥
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