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[sansunparapluie]

I saw the sky painted in your eyes - excerpt; Jinki/Jonghyun; PG-13
note: this is old and I'm posting it because I feel bad abandoning writing and not updating either of my ongoing fic series. testing the waters with a part one. this is a wartime!AU, not based specifically on any real life events or locations, though technology is comparable to

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[kayjay1212]

This is going to be sad, isnt it? Sad Jongyu is the worst.

At the time of the classroom scene, had Jjong met Onew yet?

[sansunparapluie]

well it's about the level of everything else that I've written? with the exception of that crack!jongyu.

at the time of this classroom scene, yes they've met. the last line - And that boy - refers to onew. so he drifts off to sleep during class while thinking of, among other things, onew.

[kayjay1212]

So basically its going to wither be heart breaking, or soul crushing? Good to know.

I realized that the line referred to Onew. But I thought it was possible that this chapter was creating a sense of who Jjong was before he met Jinki. And that the last part was a narration not by Jjong, foreshadowing what is to come. Mostly because of the introspective way in which it was written. But now that I look at the paragraph again, I realize that you'd mentioned the boy, onew, right before that as well. So obviously not.

[sansunparapluie]

well, I'm not too good at the warm and fuzzy, so alas what can I be but a heartbreaker?
(ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ

(I'm editing this comment purely because I don't want my emoticon to be broken over two lines. - 3-)

[kayjay1212]

lol, how very accurate of you.

(you're adorably anally retentive)