Anosmia -- prologue

[sansunparapluie]

Measure it out in grams; Jinki/Minho, Kibum/Minho; PG-13
note: I'm posting this for no better reason than that it was raining when I woke up. Back when I first sketched out the prologue inside my head, it wasn't like this at all. But that was so long ago that I forgot what I'd wanted to write. «Anosmia» will be a series of related short pieces

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[ruethereal]

you and your onho, i can't wait ;~; i've always loved your dialogue and internal monologues. let's see if you can get me to like minkey though (bc minkey is my least favorite ship y'see). alas, knowing you, you'll curse me with writing minkey whenever i want to write jongyu the way you did with onho

♥

[sansunparapluie]

Hi ♥ How have you been?

Yes, me and my Onho lol. But I don't think I'll be able to convert you to Minkey, seeing as I don't exactly ship them myself, haha. The Minkey in this thing just...spontaneously came to be. :/ Not the first time that this happened though. Like, there was one time where I was writing a Jongyu. And then I watched it gradually turn itself into Jongtae and I was like whut o__o BUT BUT I DONT EVEN SHIP THEM!?!! I don't know the tonnage of the Jongtae-ship but before that I hadn't even considered the two of them as a pair. orz

I'm trying to find the line between being confusing and being too explicit. Do you have an inkling as to what's going on though? Why he cries?

[reinyuu]

what is this??!!
why its sooooo beautiful and well written..
so motional eventought i dont know who was the one who.bed ridden and who's the another one..beside kibum present i dont get which one is minho and which one is onew..but THIS IS SO.BEAUTIFUL...
omg.. i cant wait for more...
as usual.. your dialogue and monologue. . and your ideas always take my interest... <3<3<3<3<3

[sansunparapluie]

Aw thanks. :'D
I'm glad you like it! Haha, who's who will become clear pretty soon.
I have a few scenes that I know I want to write. Just have to sort out the order and put those images into words. ^^

[itsjustjodie]

this sounds really good :)

[sansunparapluie]

Hello~
And thank you. 8)
I brain-dumped this thing in one go and tweaked it more times than a prologue needs.
Hopefully it'll continue to be a worthwhile read lol.

[sansunparapluie]

Thanks. :3 I've written mostly from Onew's perspective so I wanted to experiment a little. Which is why Tucked Away tells the story mostly as Taemin sees it and this thing here revolves around my Minho-character. No idea how long it'll go on for, but whereas Tucked Away is a continuous story, Anosmia won't be. I'll stop whenever I run out of things I want to share about the Minho of this particular universe~

Recently, I have an inability to keep writing/finish things and a counterproductive urge to start on new ideas. I tried holding Anosmia back but nope. This happened. Do you write AU? Or do you follow the canon? What are your other WIPs about?

Oh I'm not even talking about sasaengs. (Have you seen that photo of Junsu in a restaurant with those girls in the window? That shit freaked me out.) Even gaein fans can be pretty bad, or those who put down others in the process of praising someone they like. And, ofc, there are people who think they have (and need to have) some form of ownership over some aspect of their idol. Most of us

[sansunparapluie]

Not quite. But I do have other WIPs. And I write down phrases, lines, conversations whenever an idea is exceptionally vivid. (But it's never the same when I revisit these to try and make out the original scenes. Which makes me sad because then it never gets as good again. This is what happened to my wartime!AU WIP. Blargh.) Canon can be challenging to write; AU affords you the license to make anything you want happen xD; Your candle WIP sounds really cool. I'd want to read that. :O Would you light your candle

[oconje]

Hi, can I have access to read the rest? Just finished Countdown and want to read more from this universe.

[sansunparapluie]

hello~ I add back anyone who adds me and introduces themselves a little, just so I know who is who. xD;; to start things off, I'm renn. jongyu is my otp but I get onho writing feelies so much more often that sometimes I can't tell who my otp is. dream girl has been a pretty ideal era for the onho ship!

you're probably the first person who came here after Countdown, since there was quite a big break between it and this! my writing style really changed though...hopefully it'll all still be okay.

[oconje]

Hi Renn, I'm Jenny and my otp is Onho, then Jongyu. I'm psyched to read more of your fics. I still remember the first fic of yours that I read...the one where Onho are on a single bike together as kids, then Minho leaves town?

[sansunparapluie]

Hi Jenny~ Haha, you're aboard good ships. xD

Ah, you were there for "What forever feels like"...! That was so long ago! The second thing I ever posted to LJ. Forever and then Countdown and then Anosmia and then Bird: the progression of my Onho writing...

Well, have fun reading Anosmia (it's incomplete still) and hopefully it doesn't confuse you too much. ^^; It's written out of chronological order so it might be a little hard to make sense off early on. There are lots of small connections between the different chapters though and between Anosmia and Countdown, so finding these out might...potentially be......fun? ;u;