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sanshal

Alpha-mates Chapter-13/ ?

Mar 20, 2013 10:42

Chapter-13
Summery- What happens when two rivals are compelled into a mating-bond ???
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forced mating, alpha!jared, a/b/o, humiliation!, fiction, alpha! jensen

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willfia March 20 2013, 06:57:51 UTC

aww!! jensen is sooo powerful yet so humble.loved jared being determinate about accepting himself as an ackles. I want more*hugs*

sanshal March 23 2013, 19:28:45 UTC

Yeah; the boys are seemingly better; right?

Thanks for the lovely comment!
*hug*

deansgirl7107 March 20 2013, 12:52:28 UTC

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Me like it.

More pleaseeeeeeee

sanshal March 23 2013, 19:27:45 UTC

:-) Thanks!

deans2muse March 20 2013, 14:57:39 UTC

Would it be too much to ask if you have decided who will be the bottom in this relationship? It seems to be leaning toward Jared but I'm not completely sure. I know it shouldn't matter because this is a good story but I'm find it hard to read it. I'm sad, I know. I just don't see someone as protective as Jensen is being taking advantage of his higher position. Is that why he didn't take Jared up on his offer last night? I hope so.

sanshal March 23 2013, 19:27:25 UTC

I can't really respond to your query in this thread; sorry. I've sent you a PM though.

And thank you for the lovely comment!

sammichgirl March 21 2013, 00:07:12 UTC

Wow, Jared! Totally was not expecting Jared to present himself in submission. And for Jensen to turn it down - for now, anyway. I love the possessive little hand over the belly thing, very sweet and hopefully a foreshadowing of good things to come.

Sad about Jensen losing his previous beta. Do we find out what happened to her - was she killed because he as Pack Alpha? Is that why Jensen has security trailing Jared, for protection?

I like that Jared decided to stay Ackles pack. I think that bodes well for them both. Great update!

sanshal March 23 2013, 19:25:44 UTC

Totally was not expecting Jared to present himself in submission.

I know; but he's reacting out of anger and hurt... not really thinking things through, as becomes apparent when Jensen spurns his offer and he finally realises what he'd been offering to the alpha.

And Jensen's history in this fic... yeah- not all sunshine and daisies.

Thanks for the lovely comment!

anonymous March 21 2013, 01:03:07 UTC

I knew there was a reason Jensen was a stealth alpha.... . You sure dropped in lots of plot twists here! Look forward to how the past is reveiled and the future develops.

sanshal March 23 2013, 19:22:54 UTC

I knew there was a reason Jensen was a stealth alpha...

lol

Thanks!