Broken Soles

Oct 14, 2014 23:51

Broken soles
Summary- John comes home...
Rating- PG, Gen.

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sam, teen!dean, dean, wee sam

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ferrous_wheeler October 15 2014, 00:23:31 UTC
Love it!!! I might be way off base here, but to me this has almost a dream-like quality like John has gone back somehow to when the boys were young and had the chance to say and do the things that he should have the first time.

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sanshal October 15 2014, 18:03:24 UTC
Aww... thanks! And while it wasn't a 'time-travel' fic per say; I had intended it to feel 'dreamy' as you so beautifully described it. For John, his reality is hunting monsters... so when he finally comes home for a spell and interacts with his boys it does feel like an alternative reality to him.

So happy you got that!Thanks again!

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samanddeanfan1 October 15 2014, 00:35:35 UTC
That was so cool. I love the boy's defending each other. You got Funky town into the story, cool!

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sanshal October 15 2014, 18:04:12 UTC
I loved it when show showed us that they had codes.
Thanks for taking the time to comment!

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reggie11 October 15 2014, 05:04:33 UTC
How sad that Dean automatically assumed it wasn't John because he was being nice. Very poignant piece.

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sanshal October 15 2014, 18:05:02 UTC
Yeah, he never really had John complimenting him, did he?
Thanks for commenting!

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turquoiseyes October 19 2014, 09:41:29 UTC
This was so beautifully heart wrenching. I'm at a loss for words!

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sanshal October 19 2014, 14:51:53 UTC
Thank you for the sweet words!

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greenblue26 December 3 2014, 02:59:11 UTC
wow, you could totally feel the emotional hit every time john learns something unexpected about his son.

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sanshal December 4 2014, 06:29:08 UTC
thanks!

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