Voulez-vous couchez avec moi? (3/3), Gabriel Gray/Sylar x Mohinder Suresh, PG

[sansdatelimite]

Title: Voulez-vous couchez avec moi? (3/3)
Author: SephirothFlame
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Gabriel Gray/Sylar x Mohinder Suresh
Warnings: Slash
Spoilers: Heroes, s2
Word Count: Approx. 891
Rants: Finally, the third part. I had meant to put this up weeks ago, but I'd forgotten I'd had it, and then I had to rewrite it... I don't like this, not

Comments

[levitatethis]

I'm so glad you posted the third part to this story...and that it made me go back to reread the first two parts as a refresher!

I really like the way you "ended" this (if one were to think of this as an ending instead of the beginning it really is). I find the Sylar/Gabriel interactions really fascinating and I like the dark humour that runs (mostly on behalf of Sylar) throughout.

I dig the idea of Sylar giving Gabriel this, albeit brief, moment with Mohinder...the one opportunity for the kiss, for Gabriel to express what he wants and to pretend that Mohinder feels the same (and had circumstances not been what they were, Mohinder's feelings would have been reciprocal...which is potentially even sadder for Gabriel).

Something I really love is that Mohinder still resists to the end. No matter his own confused feelings on the situation it feels very much like Mohinder to fight back -- out of pride, out of doing the right thing, out of some attempt at common sense...and it's a nice contrast to Sylar smirking away at the end, using words and his powers to turn Mohinder's world upside down while Gabriel cries off to the side.

[sansdatelimite]

OMG. Longest reply I've ever gotten, and it's full of such nice things! ♥s. Normally I'd force myself to sit and reply back to everything, but I like to hear the sound of my own voice (of my keyboard as I type?) and will rant, so I won't. Or maybe I will.

First things first. Thanks so much for reading (and rereading) this. ♥s. I don't write as anything more than a it's-the-middle-of-maths-and-I'm-bored-out-of-my-freaking-mind-,-hey-slash-bunny so I'm generally self-concious about posting, so it's great to get such positive feedback.

^_^ I'm glad you like my Sylar/Gabriel interactions. I'm never sure how to write these two, because I've seen them portrayed so many ways... but thanks. I enjoy writing them, and it's nice to know I'm not like totally killing cannon here. (I'd have to kill myself...)

^___^ I wrote this chapter three-four times before I posted this because I couldn't get it write, and my girlfriend and friends kept suggesting all sorts of things happen between them; namely that they had to kiss, and I quite agree. I'm bad at writing anything romantic though, so... TT_TT

I think, in another time, before the whole drug-Sylar's-tea-and-try-and-kill-him-thing that they would have hooked up. They're practically cannon. Mylar FTW.

And yeah. Mohinder. Momo. @_@

I'm gonna stop there, because I realize I'm ranting again, and I didn't mean to. So, if you actually read this, I apologize. Like I said. Like to hear my own voice. (But at least I admit it!)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. ♥s. It keeps me writing.

♥s again.
-Sans