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sanjuno

That is NOT a vampire. It sparkles. Ergo, it's obviously a fairy godmother.

Apr 20, 2010 00:50

Title: The Nine Rings of Vos: Defection
A Transformers G1 Fanfic
Author: Sanjuno Shori Niko
Summary: The best cover is one that is true. That doesn't make doing the job any easier though.
Timeline: More fic here.

( I'm awfully mean to the Autobots, aren't I? )

transformers fanfic, fanfiction, transformers, series: nine rings of vos, dragons

Comments 21

smallredjet April 20 2010, 05:03:52 UTC

awww, this was lovely.
also, the title is hilarious.

sanjuno April 28 2010, 01:42:22 UTC

Thanks! Glad to hear you think so. ^_^

moonbeamsfanfic April 20 2010, 06:07:08 UTC

I am fascinated by your description of the Seeker written language. Your world-building is so rich, no detail is left unexplored for its meaning and impact on the culture you've so thoroughly created and brought to vivid life. This Seeker culture has easily become one of my top ten favourite AUs of all time and it just keeps getting better and better! (I even recc'd it as such when I first discovered it last year! XD ( ... )

sanjuno April 28 2010, 01:38:04 UTC

Ha, I've said it before and I'll say it again: Worldbuilding is my kink, yo. (Oh ho? *checks out link)

Eye is better now. Thanks for the well wishes! ^_^

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sanjuno April 28 2010, 01:35:47 UTC

Worldbuilding is fun~♥ and devided loyalties is the name of the game for now. XP

anonymous April 20 2010, 14:11:31 UTC

I have to agree with Hound, the work is never boring. ^^

I think this chapter was very well done. Jetfire likely thought about some of the same things as Hound. Yet both knew what the reactions were likely to be. Hopefully there will be some who will understand. I know some are going to likely feel used, and those who are going to have their heritage laid out for them are not going to want to believe it. You did a good job in this piece of showing the divided loyalties, even as he knows he's doing this for the right reasons.

sanjuno April 28 2010, 00:58:48 UTC

There will be some who understand, some who are willing to wait and see, and then there are some who will need their heads pounded in. The Bots are kinda a mixed bag of personalities.

anonymous April 20 2010, 22:30:53 UTC

You're a tease.
Now I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Poor Hound, I don't think convincing the others that the Seekers aren't so bad will be easy. Especially because he will have to do it in a way that nobody will feel betrayed and doubt his words once he reveals his true colors.

But perhaps he will get help from an unexpected source.
If I read Optimus' reaction right, it could be that the Prime himself will begin to carefully test the waters and change the opinion of his mechs.
He's smart enough to see the problems a sudden reappearance of the Seekers and age-old prejudices coould cause.

At least I hope so.

Balrog Roike

sanjuno April 28 2010, 00:41:57 UTC

Tee hee ♥

Hey, if it were easy there wouldn't be much of a stor now would there?

Prime is one rather large ace to have up ones sleeve, yes. XP And he's good at what he does, that mech.