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Mar 07, 2010 22:14

Title: The Nine Rings of Vos: Oppression
A Transformers G1 Fanfic
Author: Sanjuno Shori Niko
Summary: Prowl is very logical about just about everything. Even having a crush.
Timeline: More of Nine Rings here.

Well, that's one way to avoid childhood angst. )

transformers fanfic, fanfiction, transformers, series: nine rings of vos, dragons

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moonbeamsfanfic March 8 2010, 04:40:18 UTC
*wibbles* Okay, yeah I know, I'm totally skipping the point of this fic, but this line:

Prowl had not failed to see his Genitor’s surprise and excitement when Prowl had smiled while speaking about Jazz.

Oh man, there is just something so wretchedly heartbreaking about that idea. Poor Interceptor. He loves his creation so badly, knowingly gave up all emotional connection just to see his sparkling survive, stood by him and would do anything for him... and all it takes is one little smile to make his orn?

:(

My hearts hurts for Interceptor. Poor sweet, darling daddy. Prowl loved you, he really did. You were a good daddy, you did what had to be done. I'm so proud of you. ::sniffs:: I miss you!

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sanjuno April 16 2010, 03:37:14 UTC
Aww. *pats* I was wondering who was going to pick up on that woe!sub-point. Interceptor is a good parent. And one of my favourite characters. I'm kinda sad I had to kill him off. *sighs*

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jackalyn March 8 2010, 04:54:38 UTC
So happy to see you back so writing. It's nice to see how Prowl and Jazz are getting along when they where young.

by the way you have a 0 instead of a dash in out side the box.

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sanjuno April 16 2010, 03:34:00 UTC
I'm always wrting, it's just that sometimes I'm not online for various and sundry reasons. XP Prowl and Jazz are cute kids.

Whoops. *fixed*

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coriopsis March 8 2010, 06:23:53 UTC
"A simple program that explained the ridiculous and illogical by attributing it to Jazz’s influence"

So, if anything weird happens, its Jazz's fault? Lol.

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zatnik March 8 2010, 09:06:18 UTC
ROFL, I like that clarification...

*Is D'awwing over this one*

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sanjuno April 16 2010, 03:26:35 UTC
But it's true!

*beams proudly*

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sanjuno April 16 2010, 03:28:52 UTC
... Yep. It's a logical assumption wut. XP

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bookscrazygirl March 8 2010, 11:44:08 UTC
I like it! (then again, you should know by now my reaction to Prowl and Jazz *cues background squealing*)

Aww... Its a good thing Prowl is so down to earth or he would be sooo spoiled!

And now I have a bunny of Interceptor watching the two of them from the Well of Allsparks and confronting the one that dies (it happens every season)

He knew this feeling, this presence. Or at least something similar. It had the same light steadiness, if that made any sense, like a wind along the ground. Warmer, more... present, then its higher sky cousins, but a wind all the same. Thats when the presence intensified.

"YOU! Will turn around and go console my creation right this instance or I will ensure that the Well of Allsparks would be so boring for you, you'd be begging Primus to send you back out again!"

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sanjuno March 8 2010, 15:01:16 UTC
*chortles* It's true, it's true! Prowl could have ended up very spoiled indeed. XD But you can't say he's not used to getting his way! *snerk*

... I want to read this bunny. I don't care if it'll be AU, I want to read this bunny! Make it so!

(>.> ... you have a wonderful turn of phrase. And that line is so very Interceptor. XD)

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bookscrazygirl March 10 2010, 07:47:14 UTC
sanjuno April 16 2010, 03:14:18 UTC
Yay! *reads*

... *mad giggles* It's perfect! ♥

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genre_savvy March 8 2010, 16:15:38 UTC
In this 'verse, these two crazy kids never fail to break my heart. Poor babies.

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sanjuno April 16 2010, 03:21:48 UTC
They are too sweet sometimes. XP

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