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sanjuno

OK, so whose brilliant idea was it to have sunset at 4:30?

Nov 29, 2009 15:38

Title: The Nine Rings of Vos: Defection
A Transformers G1 Fanfic
Author: Sanjuno Shori Niko
Summary: Seekers are really, really good at Hide'n'Seek! XP
Timeline: More seeker!fic here.

( Jazz would like to initiate a house-rule now please. )

transformers fanfic, fanfiction, transformers, series: nine rings of vos, dragons

Comments 22

magni_zeal November 29 2009, 21:05:05 UTC

Hehe. Poor confused Jazz. It's not gonna get any better, Jazz, best just to sit back and enjoy...

And yay... um... warn news. ^^ It is good to see what everyone else is up to at this point.

sanjuno December 1 2009, 02:48:10 UTC

Confused Jazz is cute though! ^-^

I like giving everyone their chance to speak. XD

moonbeamsfanfic November 29 2009, 21:09:14 UTC

Nothing involving Starscream ever worked out the way one expected it to.

Well, true, but what would be the fun in that? Starscream's way is always more entertaining. *eg*

The mental image of Megatron and the other Decepticons running wildly amok searching desperately for the lost Seekers is endlessly amusing. But I especially like how you worked out the effect their disappearance would have on the course of the battle, as the loss of their numbers and prowess would definitely lead to a new status quo. Very wise you are!

Hmm, I just had a thought... Hound, Cliffjumper and whoever the secret undercover agent is must be having the best laugh ever watching everyone run around so panicked and confused. And they can't even tell anyone why! LOL! ::cackles evilly::

sanjuno December 1 2009, 02:45:44 UTC

And what sort of life would it be without a source of constant entertainment? XD

Isn't it though? And yeah, I did a lot of thinking about how I was going to get the Seekers free of the Cons and the Bots ready to consider allying with them.

*evil giggles*

kaitekat November 29 2009, 21:19:30 UTC

(For once, Prowl’s habit of compartmentalizing his emotions into logical/illogical responses was working out in Jazz’s favour.)

That line made me giggle. A lot. XD

Yay, more PxJ!! *bounces*

sanjuno December 1 2009, 02:46:29 UTC

Glad to hear that you enjoyed it. ^_^

anonymous November 29 2009, 21:53:00 UTC

I've noticed how you jump around, but it doesn't bug me much. I actually like it.

Just wondering though, did this piece take place right before the Skyfire crashing one you posted yesterday? Or is it shortly before it happens?

And that last line is so, so true. Little does Jazz know just HOW much truth there is to it.

Starfire

P.S. In response to your response for the Skyfire story, I shall be waiting VERY patiently. At least trying to. *grins*

sanjuno December 1 2009, 02:43:19 UTC

Good to know.

And yes, this part takes place just before the crash-into-city piece.

Irony. It is my meat and drink.

(Patience is a virtue. XP)

anonymous December 1 2009, 16:11:24 UTC

Ok, I had wondered because there was nothing about Tracks and Blaster in that crashing piece and I was curious as to where they were after I read this one.

Starfire

sanjuno December 1 2009, 16:41:08 UTC

After the Cons went away Tracks and Blaster strapped themselves in like good little Auotbots. XP

bookscrazygirl November 29 2009, 22:53:52 UTC

Now I really wanna know the POV of the spies, if only to join in the laughter and smirks!

Poor Prowl tho, overworking himself into a meltdown. *Pushes the black and white officers into a room and locks the door* Go take a vacation!

Yay, more PXJ love!

sanjuno December 1 2009, 02:39:22 UTC

I've been playing about with some of the undercover Seekers, so we should get around to seeing how they're handling things soon-ish.

That's Prowl for you though. Good thing he has Jazz around to serve as a handy distraction. XP