Comments | sanguineus: Pretenses (romance|angst|drabble/PG-13)

sanguineus

Pretenses (romance|angst|drabble/PG-13)

May 25, 2006 22:31

NaruNejiHina. I like how it turned out immensely. I did not mean for it to bleed into NaruSasuSaku, but eh, what are you gonna do.

Largely NaruNejiHina. Enjoy it. Sweet and things. Bit angsty.

( [pretenses] spilling into pools around their beautiful faces, thick and shining with a feathery almost-heaviness that makes him ache )

narunejihina; fic; naruto

Comments 2

snarkylightning May 26 2006, 04:24:35 UTC

Beautiful fic. I loved the rich detail you put into your writing and how you captured the dynamic between them, especially how Shino and Kiba reminded Hinata of Naruto and the other two and their teammates. Sad ending, but powerful. Excellent job!

sanguineus May 26 2006, 04:58:02 UTC

Thank you! Hehe, all of the teams are two boys and one girl! It is fairly easy to relate them. Kiba and Naruto are pretty similar, except I don't really like Kiba :3 So I try not to get into it too much and I didn't want to go on and on...

It is the NaruSasuSaku that really gets me! ;.;