FIC: Stop Looking at Me, 1/1

[sanguefic]

title Stop Looking at Me, 1/1
pairingKirk/McCoy,
rating nc-17
word-count approx 6,300
warnings There’s lots of naughtiness but be warned, it’s also a bit thinky.
disclaimer I mean no offence and court no profits, these boys belong to others more talented and deserving, I merely borrow them, play a while then return them all cleaned up and smiley

Comments

[anruiukimi]

This was truly a different and interesting story, very brave (and great!)

Thanks for the great read. :D

[sangueuk]

Thank you so much for letting me know you liked it!

[blcwriter]

Amazing, love the little changes, m'dear. And thank you, thank you so much.

[sangueuk]

You're very welcome and thank you for helping me make it better!

[prncss_keroline]

Oh. Oh oh oh. I adore this so very, very much!
Wonderful approach, using Proust, and something I never would have thought of. You managed to work the two areas together rather perfectly. Perfect balance of humor, seriousness, and UNGGGG GAH HOT HOT HOT.

I love you. ♥

[sangueuk]

Perfect balance of humor, seriousness, and UNGGGG GAH HOT HOT HOT. Thank goodness for that - it could have been a disaster! *g* Thank you for your lovely comments, as always, bb!

[izzyfics]

My heart hurts a little after this one, kind of like this line:

His eyes were closed and he looked more peaceful than Jim had ever seen him. It kind of hurt to look at him.

Thinky sexy fic is the best fic. Excellent!

[sangueuk]

I loved the way you used that line for fb, *blushes* - thank you!

[lilbatfacedgirl]

OH MY GOD!!! Oh my god!!! Trek and PROUST!!!! I think you might have killed me with this.

You're Jim voice is great but your PROUST voice is positive perfection! I LOVE it!!

[sangueuk]

*g* I'm thrilled it worked - it sounded like madness when I planned it originally! Thank you!