FIC: The Ringmaster, 2/4

[sanguefic]

Title: The Ringmaster 2/3
Author: sangueuk
Rating: nc-17 overall
Character/Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Wordcount: this part 3,800 words
Summary: AU set sometime in the 19C before medical hygiene and dermal regenerators, McCoy, the circus hobo clown is summoned by Ringmaster, Kirk, who needs some medical attention. It’s essential to read PART ONE first.
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Comments

[lindmere]

Oh, this continues to be deliciously atmospheric and sensual--I can absolutely smell the smells and hear the sounds. I'm disappointed in a way that we don't get to see McCoy's clown act, but perhaps it's better left to the imagination :)

His cock burned and it was as if the lioness had scored there, from tip to base

Woof--it was McCoy's touch, still packing a punch all these hours later.

“Fuck off out of my head, Spock.” His grin widened. “Save it for the gallery.”

Spock as a mentalist is brilliant! Easiest job he ever had :)

“I need you to take a look at Missy. Spock reckons she’s got something up with her teeth,”

Slipping a chloroform-laced steak to a lion may beat out patching up a horta. Bones can cure anything including a rainy day.

he saw every magnificent inch or Kirk’s pale, muscled body.

Kirk is such an exhibitionist, and he loves to be the center of attention. I'm not surprised that he's the ringmaster, or that he figures showing McCoy the goods is enough to seal the deal.

“Close the door. It’s cold, “he said

[sangueuk]

I'm disappointed in a way that we don't get to see McCoy's clown act, but perhaps it's better left to the imagination :) I think it is best left in the dark - someone, I don't think his heart's in it!

[lindmere]

But I wonder if Jim doesn't come out for his performance finding that McCoy has "warmed up" the audience to the point that they're all suicidal. Maybe it's a performance art kind of thing where he just stands in the ring in his wig and makeup and bitches about his ex-wife.

(I just love the idea of a really angry clown! I'm one of those clownophobes who had bad clown experiences as a youngster.)

[sangueuk]

No, bb. They just want to shag. I have this great insight into the male mind, you see... ;D

[gone_city]

You've somehow taken something I'd ordinarily think is silly and turned it into something astoundingly sexy. I mean this is really good. I eagerly await the next chapter.

[sangueuk]

Sexy is good, thanks, I'll take that! Thanks for commenting - #3 isn't far behind!

[easilymused1956]

This is such a wonderful story. My dad was a circus freak, ahem, devotee. So we were around them quite a bit. You have just the right touch.

Will be looking for Part 3.

Renee

[sangueuk]

I did quite a bit of research so I'm glad I managed to pull it off - thank you for reading!

[snowinginjune]

jim and bones circus sex tym nows?!?!!
(BIG EYED SITTING ON THE FLOOR WAITING... EYES GETTING BIGGERRRR!!!!!)

[sangueuk]

Watch this space!

[nikki4noo]

You know how much I adored the first part of this series.

This is a fitting response to what was created in the first part. The emotion and evocative feeling that showed through in your descriptions was lovely. You pulled me into the Victorian era and the splendor and the shabbiness of the circus. Then there are the two boys. Both starting to acknowledge the attraction and dealing with it in different ways.

I look forward to part three.

[sangueuk]

What a lovely comment, thank you! I think Kirk is looking forward to part 3 more than anyone else is!