Take your coat, Sir?

Sep 29, 2008 10:14

Title: Take your coat, Sir?
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Notes, credits: A while back, four of us wrote porn to the same prompt, then workshopped them together. This is mine. Alpha/beta credit goes to definehome, demotu, and resourceress.
Summary: Just a little bit of coat!porn, largely without plot. Set around the second half of Series 1. 1160 words.

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kalichan September 29 2008, 17:32:17 UTC
HOT! God, I love coat!porn. I also liked the switch-y aspect; it's rare to see coat!porn that takes the trope of service!Ianto, but turns the power dynamic on its *ahem* head. I really like the image of Jack's coat sheltering them from the world. And I also love Ianto, left all turned on and wanting -- and enjoying it. *g* The other fantastic thing about this little vignette is that I could see it - the way it visually played out was very distinct.

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sanginmychains September 30 2008, 01:55:17 UTC
On one's knees is a very powerful place, I've always thought. I'm so glad you liked it.

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geckoholic September 29 2008, 17:54:00 UTC
Oh, very nice! I like to read stuff where Ianto takes control, instead of being a little begging affair depending on Jack's grace . . . ;-)

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sanginmychains September 30 2008, 01:57:26 UTC
toppy!Ianto is one of my favourites. I've toyed with ideas that take the opposite approach, but I don't find them nearly so interesting, nor all that IC. In the show, Ianto is not the begging sort.

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geckoholic September 30 2008, 10:10:58 UTC
In the show, Ianto is not the begging sort.

True, I agree, he's not, not at all . . .

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mr_mrs_faxsea September 29 2008, 19:11:17 UTC
Oh this is good!
Ianto at his best!
you at your best.

-S-

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sanginmychains September 30 2008, 01:58:17 UTC
Thank you! My brain fog appears to be clearing, for awhile at least, and I'm enjoying some productivity.

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kenazfiction September 29 2008, 21:18:58 UTC
Oh, *very* hot.

“There’s food in the conference room."

That line made me laugh out loud because it really did say so much. God knows where I work, if you put food in the conference room, no matter how paltry the offering, you could set the other end of the office on fire and no one would pay any attention.

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sanginmychains September 29 2008, 21:23:24 UTC
In my first draft, it was "beer and cake" because my husband's workplace has beer and cake meetings, and I think it's brilliant. Reactions to the line were that it was a bit too obvious a ploy for Ianto to make, though, and I was forced to agree.

It says something about the soulless, joyless atmosphere of most workplaces though, doesn't it? Muffins, donuts, leftover sandwiches from a meeting of those with the status high enough to command catered food at their meetings -- it will all get people running over like hungry rats, and leave clutching their little napkins of nibbles.

Glad you liked.

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thaddeusfavour September 29 2008, 22:40:47 UTC
Squeek! Squeek squeek squeekin squee squeek! om nom nom nom om nom nom nom

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sanginmychains September 30 2008, 01:58:36 UTC
*gigglesnort*

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t_mystery01 September 29 2008, 21:22:18 UTC
GAH!! Love the coat porn!! so hot!!

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sanginmychains September 30 2008, 01:59:01 UTC
Thanks! Your icon is completely awesome.

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t_mystery01 September 30 2008, 04:29:48 UTC
Thanks! I just wish I could remember right now who I got it from so I could give them proper credit!!

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