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sanginmychains

The Dog When The Bell Rings 1/2

Dec 20, 2009 20:33

Title:The Dog When The Bell Rings
Rating: NC-17
Notes, credits: Much thanks to invisible_lift for his magical beta-fu, and to antelope_writes who read a lot of scenes in progress and treated me like me absurdly slow rate of production counted for something, and who gave me the prompt for this story in the first place. Thanks also to metastability who said "I love titles! I'll help!" and ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

definehome December 21 2009, 20:12:09 UTC

Great story. I can't believe the AMTDI is finally here.

Favorite part so far? Gwen wanting to do "Saxon", and just not being able to get why everyone's horrified. It's so in character (well in character given what we've been told the nature of the drug is).

sanginmychains December 24 2009, 04:58:26 UTC

It's tempting to play Gwen for comedy but it's not the IC thing to do, and with the Saxon blunder I hoped I found a way to make her the naif, the element that brings out the emotional moments for everyone else. But I like Gwen too much to make her just a device.

jedirita December 22 2009, 04:30:57 UTC

a man who always made direct eye contact but never seemed to be entirely there when you looked back.

Wow. Best description of Jack ever.

I love how there's humor, but also really profound emotion, in this story. That's Torchwood to a T.

sanginmychains December 22 2009, 04:50:10 UTC

I love Jack. He's so full of life, and love, and he's so terribly, tragically, irrevocably broken.

iceshade December 22 2009, 04:56:23 UTC

this is made of so much win I can't think straight... okay, so maybe it's not only the epic win ::fans self::

the hammer is my penis! ...sorry, there were a few lines there that made me want to yell that out

sanginmychains December 22 2009, 05:35:57 UTC

Okay now THAT is a compliment. Thank you thank you!