Comments | sandymg: Death Trap, 1/1, RPS, J2 nonAU, H/C, [PG]

sandymg

Death Trap, 1/1, RPS, J2 nonAU, H/C, [PG]

May 16, 2010 19:55

Title: Death Trap
AO3 for e-reader downloads
Spanish translation by alfer6
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hurt!jensen, hurt/comfort, j2, rps, death trap, spn, non-au, hurt!jared, author: sandymg

Comments 58

sinnerforhire May 17 2010, 00:04:14 UTC

Loved this! I was holding my breath, hoping they'd get their happy ending...and they did. Whew! :)

sandymg May 17 2010, 00:13:34 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad the suspense was there. I have to admit I couldn't really ever hurt one of them.

heather03nmg May 17 2010, 00:19:57 UTC

Aw, that was really hurty and awesome. We need part 2 with the comfort and snuggling and kissing. Pretty please.

weesta May 17 2010, 00:32:09 UTC

I second this!

sandymg May 17 2010, 01:01:24 UTC

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Wasn't really thinking of more as this was meant to be a little prompt-induced ficlet.

But. Maybe ;)

borgmama1of5 May 17 2010, 00:23:15 UTC

Lovely, doll. Kept me breathless. And I beta'd the darn thing :)

sandymg May 17 2010, 01:02:04 UTC

And you made sure the accident details made some sort of sense. Practicality. Bah. :)

weesta May 17 2010, 00:31:50 UTC

*flails* I love how you build the tension with the rising water. Jared's hysteria is palpable. I love how they say things they'd kept secret when they think death is imminent...and then it's not.

“You owe me one heckuva makeout session,” - right on!

sandymg May 17 2010, 01:02:23 UTC

Hee. That's my favorite line.

Glad you liked this ficlet.

wolfish_willow May 17 2010, 01:21:24 UTC

;_; *wibble* Oh, that was amazing. The whole time I'm right there with Jared, freaking out and that was great. <3<3<3

sandymg May 17 2010, 01:22:11 UTC

Glad you liked this little ficlet. It was a great prompt.