STORY: Try To Remember - Chapter 3 (Sara, Peter, Neal, Diana)

[sandy79]

Comments

[kanarek13]

Oooh, such a great chapter, yay \o/ Love Mozzie and Sally, with the two of them joining the action, Neal's survival chances are definitely up by a few percent, hehe :D I haven't seen CM but Garcia seems like a nice addition and a great way to help Sara in her recovery :D

And I just love it when our beautiful boy is being defiant and making it difficult for the bastards who kidnapped him *pets him* And he puts so much faith in Peter ♥ Maybe it's better he doesn't know that finding him is not gonna be so easy...

And you teasers for the next chapter are evil :P Heeee :D

[sandy79]

*tacklehugs* Thank you

[kanarek13]

You and I - we definitely have the same image of Neal ♥ There's just nothing he wouldn't do for his family :D

I kinda figured you wouldn't be THAT evil to make it a sad ending but the journey to get to that happy fluffy ending is still exciting... and evil :P LOL :D ♥

[sandy79]

just to let you know - next chapter will be up in the next few days (had no computer for the better part of the week - so no writing and finishing the chapter for me :((( )