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marinliliz in sandbox_society

Unexpectedly Expecting 4

Sep 29, 2009 21:23

[Characters]: Yamada Hanatarou and Zaraki Kenpachi.
[Pairing]: KenHana
[Summary]: It's truth telling time but Hanatarou just can't stop crying.
[Word Count]: 1530
[Finished]: 29.September.2009
[Beta]: not beta-read
[Warnings]: AU | Mpreg | Crack | Angst | Fluff
[Rating]: PG
( Unexpectedly Expecting 4 )

:kenhana, ^slash, fanfic, ~mpreg, *eng

Comments 16

theablackthorn September 30 2009, 08:12:19 UTC

These two are so cute! I loved Kenpachi reaction and Hana's squeeing!

marinliliz September 30 2009, 14:45:47 UTC

Thank you. I was finishing up the drabble and then had this image of Hana squeeing into a pillow, as I often do when I'm really happy about something, and had to write it. Glad you liked it♥

theablackthorn September 30 2009, 14:51:54 UTC

It was lovely darlin' :)

gokuma September 30 2009, 13:09:36 UTC

All mumdads should be happy ^^ *beaming wolf* I'll write longer and more coherent comment tomorrow *wolf on her way between work and a heavy metal concert* :)

marinliliz September 30 2009, 14:46:57 UTC

Okay. What are you going to see?

gokuma October 1 2009, 21:05:14 UTC

I went to see Dream Theater! Do you remember? - it's that band playing our Komamura/Tousen theme song :) I also saw Opeth - another great progressive metal band and two other metal bands I didn't know earlier - Unexpected and BigElf. They were also cool. BigElf's leader plays the keyboards (two at the same time). And he was wearing a very strange furcoat-like outfit and a top hat :D

Dream Theater was the main star of this concert and they were definitely the best grup (although other bands played pretty nice too). I love metal concerts: you can *feel* the music flowing in the air and through your body, it's amazing *___*

gokuma October 1 2009, 21:12:33 UTC

I don't remember if we've ever discussed this but I have a bit strange habit of imaging "video clips" to every song I hear (and like). And I'm convinced that none of the Dream Theater members had ever thought that their music can be a good illustration for a mpreg. Well, it is :D

By the way: I'm so happy we have this community! Y!gallery has some problems now, it's good that we have another place where we can post our fanstuff...

Thread 6

lnasados September 30 2009, 18:40:20 UTC

the eye patch scene, the telling, the squeeing... all just marvelous! so worth the wait. did i mention U R MARVELOUS! will miss kenhana though.

marinliliz September 30 2009, 20:51:07 UTC

*grins* Thank you so very much, your comments boost my writer's ego. I might have more of KenHana still to tell.^_~

gokuma October 1 2009, 22:00:35 UTC

Wow, Zaraki believed Hanatarou so quickly! I thought that at first he'd think it's some kind of mistake or a weird joke - you don't expect your boyfriend (/lover/partner) to get pregnant. On the other hand, it explained all Hanatarou's symptoms and Zaraki know that male pregnancy is at least possible (although I'm sure he'd never thought about becoming a parent before).

I'm wondering how is this information gonna change Zaraki and his way of thinking. I'd like to see him talking to his officers and other captains (especially Ukitake and Byakuya XD).

I'm happy that you've included this thing about the eyepatch. I'm sure Hanatarou is gonna try to convince his partner that his (= Zaraki's) body is a important thing, not some kind of a store of spare parts. And scars can be sexy but I think Hanatarou would like to see as few of them as possible.

D: I LOVE YOU! skylessuniverse November 10 2009, 12:36:53 UTC

My Kind Sir, Have My Children. The Kenhana Rocked My World and you made me visualize the whole thing. I couldnt comment the other chapters 'cause i was so into it y'know. And you Kenpachi is Dead on! D: ITS LIKE YOU ATE A PIECE OF HIM FOR BREAKFEAST! **Bounces Happly** Im So Happy

Re: D: I LOVE YOU! marinliliz November 10 2009, 15:42:45 UTC

Hehehe, your comment is awesome! Thank you. *burp*