ee cummings

Mar 01, 2006 15:41

she being Brand ( Read more... )

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sancho3412 March 1 2006, 22:00:38 UTC
the way he uses punctuation to control the way you read is amazing. and the content is good too... think about it.

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i'm a nerd.. mesospippy March 2 2006, 01:46:16 UTC
i love poetry talk, excuse my nerdiness
:)
i kind of get the feeling that he's comparing a car to sex which doesn't really make women look well and puts a bad taste in my mouth.
but i really like his punctuation and the way some of the words justflowtogether like that.

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Re: i'm a nerd.. sancho3412 March 2 2006, 14:03:19 UTC
yeah i've heard several people interpret it that way, but i didn't think about it until someone else pointed it out to me. i prefer sticking to the literal because he does such great things like the "from low through second-in-to-high" it almost gives a feel of the little breaks when he shifts gears.

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thekiefster March 3 2006, 02:40:19 UTC
I can't help but think

...Mowing..?

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bsheard March 3 2006, 17:11:29 UTC
maybe its just me being a 19-year-old guy, but that was one hell of a sexual poem.

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bsheard March 3 2006, 17:12:41 UTC
but i dont see it as belittling to females.

bothatonce!

brandon

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