Dark Angel fic: Cheaters Chapter 21 (NC-17 M/A)

[sanaazzy]

Title: Cheaters
Author: sanaazzy
Genre: Drama/Angst/Humour
Rating: M to NC-17
Status: WIP Multi-chaptered
Summary: Logan cheats on Max with Asha, Max finds out and wants revenge, so what better way to do that than hook up with Alec!MA

Comments

[rawvanila]

Great chapter!!! I was a little worried when Alec was having trouble keeping up with White. Thank goodness Alec was able to get rid of him for good! *does a happy dance* hehehe. They're so cute together! I'm sooooooooooo glad Max asked him to stay!!! Now he has to stay right? Right? He can't say no to her. Right? hehehe. I really, really loved this chapter!!! Please update soon!

[sanaazzy]

loooooooooooooooool, i guess you just have to wait and find out if he stays..*evil grin*
I had to add Alec having trouble with White, no matter how good a soldier and fighter he may be if White couldn't feel pain then White had the upper-hand.
Thanx RV, i'm really glad you enjoyed it

[djonie]

You have noo idea how glad I was when I saw you updated this story (thanks for the PM at FF.net!)!

The chapter was awesome, although I was a bit afraid that White was gonna shoot Alec or something...Thank god he didn't :)I'm with Rawvanila on this one: he has to stay right?!

There are some many things I still have to say about this, but I'm gonna keep it short: love their interaction and the fact that Max let him see her so weak, to me the characters are real: I see the Max and Alec from the show when I read it...*keeping it short,right*...Just love it in general I guess!

Thanks for writing and sharing this!

[sanaazzy]

You're welcome Joni...
I doubt alec would take anything lying down...and im pretty sure he wouldnt just lie there and let White shoot him when Max needed him.
Joni say whatever you wanna say, dont keep it short on my account...just let it all out (hehe!)
The characters are very real to me too, i picture them too.

[anonymous]

Hey sweetie!!

do you know how happy this makes me??

*happy dance*

love it!! shame that Max is injured cause Alec spending he night was promising *winks* (OMG, sorry, my dirty mind again. i can't believe i'm worse than you :p )

[sanaazzy]

*SQUEEEEEE*

LEN!!!

I guess everyone should really thank you, your constant *pushing* cough* encouragement is what made me post it.

HAHA! i do NOT have a dirty mind..i can't believe you would even thi....ok i do, which is why i say the next chap is not one that we dirty minders should miss...*winks slyly*

Len

[anonymous]

LOLL

there is no chance i'd miss the next chapter (specially after your answer *winks*)

you make look like i was constantly demanding you to update... well, now that i think about it, maybe i was *blushes*
but i know you don't mind it (much) it just means how much i love your writing :D

Re: Len

[sanaazzy]

Nope you're right i don't mind *sighs* but then i have a soft spot for candies...and besides Maga and your 'encouragements' are done in a special way! (hehe)

there is no chance i'd miss the next chapter (specially after your answer *winks*) LOL you're so dirty minded! but i love it!

[cats_eye78]

I just found this fic and am completely addicted!! I know it's been a while but, please please finish it. Also I tried to click the next chapter but it said it didn't exist? Anyway great story and I hope you revisit it.

[sanaazzy]

The next chapter doesn't exist. I'm sorry, i've been trying to finish it, i just havent had the muse. Thank you for reading though.

[death_of_dreams]

There are no words for how much I love this fic. Come back, write more? I adore jealous and possessive Alec - and I think now we should get to see jealous and possessive Max in retaliation.
I love how you've portrayed them as mates and the mating process. I really love this fic - If you ever need a beta or a fresh set of eyes, I'd love to help out. ^^

[sanaazzy]

awww dude, you've totally made my night, scratch that, week!
Honestly, i do wanna finish this (it's my baby) but im stuck on where to go plus i want to start re-writing it - because i started this when i was younger and well the writing makes me cringe.
If the offer still stands i'd love for you to be my beta - though i can't promise when the re-writing will begin. whad'ya say?

[death_of_dreams]

Absolutely!!
If you want to suss it out or talk about details or future ideas, let me know - we can do email, MSN, or AIM if you want to talk about it, okay? ^^

[sanaazzy]

Thats fantastic! thank you so much!