[ooc ; comments and critique?!]

[samurai_gr33n]

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I play Cody at samurai_gr33n and Payne at rookiekiller, and I could really use some critique here. :D; Anonymous comments are enabled so don't be afraid to tell me what's for..!

Planned logs

Cody:Samurai Green Explodes Into the Doctor's Office! Samurai Physical?! (Eldoon

Comments

[droehnendrecht]

You know I love your Payne and Cody, but I do have a few suggestions for the future regarding Cody.

One anon pointed out that you shouldn't be afraid to go beyond Cody's samurai obsession. We should really do a "end of the school year" scene with Cody and Wocky, on their final day to torture the hell out of their poor teacher. And maybe Cody brought in Samurai Cupcakes? Maybe they throw them at the teacher while playing a little game Wocky calls "hurling cupcakes at the wall".

At SamuCon, maybe Cody can have Wocky hold crap while he runs around taking cosplay photos? That ties in two of his passions right there; samurai and photography. Plus, Cody'd be super-eager that he'd be able to post more cosplay photos on his site (imagine Edgeworth's horror when he runs into Cody with a camera...)

I love what you've been doing with Cody so far and I know I'm going to continue loving him. You prove to have a grasp on his canon personality as well as the creativity to flesh his character (and the entire Samurai world) out.

When it comes to Payne, you play him as he should be; arrogant, self-centered and a dick. He thinks he's high and mighty (especially with that Cresta now) but we all know he's just a failure of a human being, clinging to whatever he can. Other prosecutors cheer when he wins a case -- because it means he'll stop talking about the a\last case he won back in 19-odd-6.

You have a beautiful grasp on Payne (just like you do Cody) and I'm eager to see more with him. I'll definitely bump up your scene count soon, we can do a couple with Klavier and Payne, as well as Wocky and Cody. Maybe even Klavier and Cody someday? Who knows, maybe the Gavinners will cover the Steel Samurai theme (I'll talk to Zio about that one, actually...). I want to find more ways to interact with you because it's always a thrill to scene with someone who knows their character as throughly as you do.

Well, that was longer than I wanted. Oh well.