Halfway Human (4/?)

Jun 24, 2011 21:30

Title: Halfway Human (4/?)
Author: mildly_obsessed
Rating: NC-17 overall
Pairing: Sam/Kurt
Word Count: ~7300
Summary: Loneliness overwhelms Kurt, and one drunken night he places an order - for a companion Orgobot.
Warnings: Swearing.
Disclaimer: I do not own Glee and am in no way affiliated with the show or its creators.
A/N: Fill for a fic meme prompt hereAn ( Read more... )

character: sam evans, author: mildly_obsessed, ship: sam/kurt, character: kurt hummel, fic rating: nc-17

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sleepingkey June 25 2011, 03:24:12 UTC
I am going to liveblog my response this time, so it will be rambly and long and much caps.

First of all, I love how you make this world come alive with the whole stigma about getting too close to your Orgobot to the point that you can't even treat it like a fun Barbie and dress it up.

EEE THEY'RE GOING ON A FASHION DATE~!

I love how Sam is still so person-like even though he's a robot, like how you might joke about being a computer and that period when one wakes up could be likened to a computer booting up and him scanning his system so much and worrying is like when someone is freaking out about going crazy or something and checking themselves in the mirror or going to the doctor, I can't.

Oh, poor Sam's creys at not having his talents and abilities be appreciated and used, waah.

SAM SECRETLY EATING KURT'S CHOCOLATE AND WORRYING THAT HE WILL GET CAUGHT, I AM CRYING, HE IS SO CUTE, I LOVE YOUR SAM SO MUCH.

Poor Sam and his warring programs. I'm just "Poor Sam"ing all over the place.

SJKSDF UH-HUH! I love how you insert little canon things from the show like that.

Ow ow ow, falling in the shower...

POOR SAM. POOR SAM. Pleaaaase don't let Kurt kick him out or anything, I can't deal with that, I just can't. I hope Kurt calms down and still takes him on their fashion date. I'm going to go wipe my tears now.

AWESOME JOB, AS ALWAYS. It was perfectly well-balanced and the descriptions were helpful and never out of place or too much or anything. You have absolutely nothing to worry about and the wait was worth it!

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mildly_obsessed June 25 2011, 03:40:19 UTC
Ahhhhh a liveblog comment! How lovely!

Yes, I tried to make the world clear and give some reasoning behind Kurt's distancing himself from Sam. There are major issues concerning the proper way to treat Orgobots, what's acceptable and what's not, that play a key role in this fic, so I wanted to get some of them down for readers to see and (hopefully) understand.

Yay fashion date! But I snatched that away for now. I'm cruel. I know.

Sam is a very advanced piece of technology - made to be as human-like as possible - so I try to get that across in my descriptions and I'm glad I succeed!

Sam has many creys in this story, I'm afraid. There are more to come. I really am so mean to him. I honestly don't know why, I love him so much, I really do. ;_;

I'm glad you think he's cute! I just have this lovely adorkable image of him in my head, and that's how he comes out :)

I had to make the nod to canon, lol! It was a perfect place for it!

I'll have to stay silent on all that, as I don't want to give anything away! I'm going to try to update sooner than I did this time around, so bear with me!

And thank you so, so much. You're always so supportive and it really gets me writing even when I feel like all I produce is crap. =_=;

Thanks so much for the wonderful comment! <3

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