Captain Untouchable!
Okay, I decided to write the script out for the Captain Untouchable comic that I'm going to be giving away at Creation's Stargate Con in April '08 instead of just making it up as I go along.
This is a preview (just the written part, no art this time) of how Sheppard and McKay meet. Tell me how I'm doing so far!!
SHEPPARD
Hello
MCKAY
Uhm, hi.
SHEPPARD
Are you Doctor Rodney McKay?
MCKAY
Yes I am. Why are you lurking around outside of my building?
SHEPPARD
John Sheppard. National Enforcer.
MCKAY
Oh great. Not only do I lose the Nobel to Calvin Kavanaugh, 6 foot 2 pointy-eared tabloid writers want to display my public humiliation to the world... And it's not even a decently reputable newspaper!
SHEPPARD
Aww c'mon, it'll only be a short interview!
MCKAY
Sure and afterwards you can drill a hole in my head and we can watch Stargate Atlantis until the sun comes up!
SHEPPARD
Hey, I like that show!
MCKAY
And you probably check your closet for the boogeyman before you go to sleep at night. Aliens who can suck your life out by touching your chest? No-freaking-way.
SHEPPARD
But---!
MCKAY
Goodnight, Mr. Sheppard. Have a nice life.
This is a preview (just the written part, no art this time) of how Sheppard and McKay meet. Tell me how I'm doing so far!!
SHEPPARD
Hello
MCKAY
Uhm, hi.
SHEPPARD
Are you Doctor Rodney McKay?
MCKAY
Yes I am. Why are you lurking around outside of my building?
SHEPPARD
John Sheppard. National Enforcer.
MCKAY
Oh great. Not only do I lose the Nobel to Calvin Kavanaugh, 6 foot 2 pointy-eared tabloid writers want to display my public humiliation to the world... And it's not even a decently reputable newspaper!
SHEPPARD
Aww c'mon, it'll only be a short interview!
MCKAY
Sure and afterwards you can drill a hole in my head and we can watch Stargate Atlantis until the sun comes up!
SHEPPARD
Hey, I like that show!
MCKAY
And you probably check your closet for the boogeyman before you go to sleep at night. Aliens who can suck your life out by touching your chest? No-freaking-way.
SHEPPARD
But---!
MCKAY
Goodnight, Mr. Sheppard. Have a nice life.