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[FIC] Star Trek: In Which We Change [2/2] (Kirk/Bones, PG-13)

Jul 07, 2010 11:18

Title: In Which We Change [2/2]
Author: salvaged_pride
Beta: sullacat
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Kirk/Bones
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: "Werewolves: Separated from the Pack" from my hurt/comfort bingo card. #2 in attempted blackout.
Summary: AU - Leonard McCoy is your ordinary, grumpy village doctor. When a young man shows up bloody and hurt on his doorstep one night, ( Read more... )

kirk/mccoy, star trek xi, hurt/comfort bingo

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fritz42 July 7 2010, 17:22:50 UTC

Wow! Just wow! This was fantastic. I loved the dynamic between Jim and Bones before and after Jim became a werewolf. Loved how even though Jim had been bitten by an alpha male, he still had his own pack, his connection and feelings for Bones. Loved how together they were going to find a way for the wolf to learn to accept Bones without harming him.

Loved all the ancient, old-fashioned medicine you wove throughout the piece.

Thanks for sharing this with us!

"T"

salvaged_pride July 7 2010, 17:49:27 UTC

Thank you for commenting! Your comment on the medicine made me smile, because over time I want to weave more of that into the next parts of this 'arc'. Still so much to explore between these two, and against Jim's... enemies. :3

fritz42 July 7 2010, 17:56:08 UTC

...over time I want to weave more of that into the next parts of this 'arc'. Still so much to explore between these two, and against Jim's... enemies.

You don't know how happy that makes me feel, knowing that I will be able to read more in this wonderful universe that you are making!!!!

I look very forward to reading more!

"T"

salvaged_pride July 7 2010, 17:58:54 UTC

Likewise, you don't know how happy it makes me knowing someone would like more of it! It's funny, because I generally don't write or read AUs but... I really got into this one! There's a whole lot built into this for sequels to ride on, a lot of unanswered questions and identities.

fritz42 July 7 2010, 18:12:42 UTC

There's a whole lot built into this for sequels to ride on, a lot of unanswered questions and identities.

Yeah! *points to icon* That's me right now, knowing all of that. I had wanted to request sequels in my initial comment, but didn't want to seem too pushy. I have so many things I would like to see in this universe of yours, most notably how their plan worked to get the wolf to accept and be comfortable with Bones. Well, that and to see more of the sizzling chemistry between the two.

I look forward to seeing those sequels some time in the future.

"T"

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