013 Clarity

[saltedboots]

Clarity
PG-13 | EunHae | Non-AU
Summary: A blur of beds and breakfasts.
A/N: This is a valiant attempt at fluff, as Rach (zephyral) has suggested. I don't even know why I accepted the challenge because what is fluff, tbh. Anyway, this is gonna be the last from me in a very, very long time maybe forever lmao.

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Comments

[lamppy]

Fluff really isn't your thing, huh? haha
I could feel your struggling to put there some drama and angst. It's okay, I guess, writing a really good fluff isn't that easy, because what's the point in making everything all sweet and sappy, right? Your angsty little details always make the story livelier and I'm always really thrilled to read you.
I'm not very fond of this point of view in reading because it's always confuses me to no end. And this story took me two times to get what is it really about. But, oh how I love your little details, like when Donghae doesn't make love to Hyukjae but he kisses his hand, or how Hyukjae kisses him on the airport to make up to upsetting him earlier. Just.. ahhhhhh <3
Why you always make Hyukjae want something else than Donghae? haha my heart hurts, you know?! That little bastard, seriously...
Ah, I'm always envy when authors write stories for each other. I guess it must be fun to accept challenges like this and having a motivation to write something that you are not completely comfortable with. Seems like...good writing exercise or something.

i apologize lmao

[saltedboots]

The thing is, I was struggling not to put angst but I still did because as you've pointed out, there's no point in making everything sappy. But I've yet to write a decent fluff fic. Til then, people just have to suffer fluff-angst "intermarriages" lmao.

I enjoyed writing in this POV lol sorry for all the confusion! And I'm glad you liked the little bits of details. And where is the struggle if it isn't Hyukjae wanting something else. But he just doesn't "want" Donghae, I suppose. :3 At least, in this story. Or we can be delusional, come on! :D I'm actually jealous of people writing stories for other people so yay. It's quite fun, being outside your comfort zone sometimes. But not all the time.

Thank youuu :D