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salr323

PotC FF: "The Fall of a Sparrow" 1/9

Aug 01, 2007 22:47

Title: The Fall of a Sparrow
Author: Sally R
Rating: PG (for now, R later)
Pairing: J/E (canon W/E)

Spoilers: Set after AWE, therefore contains spoilers!

Summary: Third mistake was the worst. Bloody fool to imagine she could- Can’t bear to think on it now, the silent lies she told with those pretty lips of hers. Believed them, though, didn’t ( Read more... )

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salr323 August 2 2007, 15:27:05 UTC

Thanks for reading, so glad you like it so far...! :)

fried_flamingo August 1 2007, 23:00:14 UTC

God, I love this fic (I know that's probably redundant by now, but I do!)

*is proud to be your #1 nagger* ;)

salr323 August 2 2007, 15:28:29 UTC

Thank you. :) And, to return the nagging... Finished that vid yet??

erinya August 1 2007, 23:27:00 UTC

Oh no...poor Jack...poor Elizabeth...Jack becoming needlessly cruel is truly a terrible thing.

She must bring him back from madness, of course. Who else would be qualified to do it?

Loved her presiding over her court, and her unwillingness to give it up. Stories in which Elizabeth really gets to be King are my favorite.

salr323 August 2 2007, 15:29:58 UTC

Thanks for reading! Really pleased you like it so far. Poor Jack indeed, I really felt he was clinging on by his fingernails in AWE...

And Elizabeth has to be King, of course. :)

marla_mulder August 1 2007, 23:29:57 UTC

This was SUCH an incredibly good first chapter to a story. You nailed the characterizations perfectly! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

salr323 August 2 2007, 15:31:44 UTC

Oh thank you! That's a great compliment. :) Next chapter up later today...

briadia anonymous August 1 2007, 23:33:19 UTC

I was so excited when I checked and saw U updated. It's great!

Re: briadia salr323 August 2 2007, 15:32:28 UTC

Thank you! Pleased you enjoyed it. :) More later today...