Comments | salmon_pink: (Harry Potter) Damsel

salmon_pink

(Harry Potter) Damsel

Jul 25, 2007 22:23

Title: Damsel

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Bellatrix/Hermione
Rating: R
Words: 658
Timeline: Deathly Hallows

Notes: Questionable consent. Spoilers for Deathly Hallows - in the fic and in the comments.

Summary: Interrogation tastes like a chase.

( “Hermione,” she whispers, rolling the word on her tongue, tasting it, savouring it. )

yuri, harry potter, fic

Comments 27

lynsangelic1 July 25 2007, 21:37:40 UTC

Wonderful. Such a well written Bella POV.

I got tons of B/Hr plot bunnies from DH; from this scene in the Manor to Hermione being Bellatrix in particular. I've got at least four on the go right now!

But love for this.

the noises she makes sound so hurt, pretty pained noises, like fear and hopelessness and sex.

salmon_pink July 25 2007, 22:12:39 UTC

Thank you, Bella's is a rather terrifying, yet kinda fun, headspace to crawl into. DH was extremely generous in its gift of B/Hr subtext, wasn't it? ;)

ex_chaosity July 27 2007, 09:49:34 UTC

DH was extremely generous in its gift of B/Hr subtext, wasn't it?

IT SO WAS. :D

salmon_pink July 31 2007, 22:28:13 UTC

I was such a happy bunny after reading that scene, thinking about all the lovely B/Hr fics that were sure to bloom. During the scene, I was rather terrified for Hermione's safety but afterwards, happy bunny. :)

kitsuneasika July 25 2007, 21:44:14 UTC

Love it. You got Bellatrix down. And I love how you didn't just push everyone else to the room aside like they weren't there~

salmon_pink July 25 2007, 22:13:22 UTC

Thank you so much. I can't see Bellatrix forgetting about the others, I think she'd rather appreciate the audience. ;)

mcdoh1902 July 25 2007, 23:26:25 UTC

Bellatrix is so wonderfully crazy amd sexy at the same time that I sort of felt the movie didn't do her justice. Gotta love how JKR let us draw conclusions on our own in that scene.

salmon_pink July 31 2007, 22:30:02 UTC

Yeah, movie!Bellatrix just added even more sauce to an already delicious dish. ;) And I don't think I could have coped with an explicit description of Hermione being tortured, but my imagination probably provided an even worse scenerio that what JKR had dreamed up. She's crafty like that.

eyesofantasy July 25 2007, 23:53:11 UTC

Oh, wow.

Bellatrix ix simultaneously crazy and sexy as hell.

Loved Draco backing away while Fenrir settles in to watch. Just perfect.

salmon_pink July 31 2007, 22:31:12 UTC

Thank you so much. :D Bellatrix is shockingly fun to write for, so dirty and sexual, and so wonderfully aware of her audience. ;)

x_spraycheese July 26 2007, 02:00:10 UTC

MMMmmm Bellatrix is so damn sexy. Thank you for this.

salmon_pink July 31 2007, 22:31:49 UTC

Mmmmmm, appropriate icon usage. ;)