I totally agree! Cruel! Oh The wretched humanity! You're writing has a gossamer quality to it. Like I'm reading it from behind a veil of sheer palpable air. It's very lazy and slow which fits perfectly and I appreciate. It's tender and sweet and real-- and that makes all the difference.
You know, it was heartbreaking to write lol! I'm very glad you liked it and recognized Daniel, that's really the way I see him, too. Thank you very much for writing, Schnaucl.
I was a bit nervous to share it actually, first story to be posted and all, you know... okay, very nervous, lol! But reading all these lovely comments and knowing that people have felt something reading this little story, was worth all the biting nails, lol!
For one moment in our lives, one fleeting moment, he was mine and I was his, and the memory of it will have to last the rest of our lives.
Like a dream, a one and only blissful moment, a dream we can never make again.
That seems so cruel! *whimper* It makes absolute sense of course, but still very sad.
I love the whole thing, but especially part one. You've captured Daniel perfectly. The man is nothing if not a study in contradiction.
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Kisses,
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Trust me, I'm the one who should be thanking you :)
It was beautiful. And thank you for sharing it.
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