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[fic] right then !

Jan 25, 2010 10:17

ENTRY 08
TITLE: Untitled
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 1249
NOTES: a mad dash to the finish line. Un-beta-ed, and I apologise in advance if any typos distract you when reading this. Hope you still enjoy it though <3.

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fandom : fanfiction, !contests

Comments 6

katmillia January 25 2010, 04:59:17 UTC

Guns! Shooting! Fighting! Hooooot~~~ ♥ I loved the adrenaline-ridden devouring of each other afterwards, since they were no doubt still riding that high. :Db

miquilis January 25 2010, 11:32:42 UTC

I love a good old Sakumoto that's filled with nothing but death, angst and Jun and Sho slightly hating each other but then all really sweet and loving at the same time ♥ no other pairing does it better, it's really their element ♥

astrangerenters January 25 2010, 16:21:59 UTC

I like them in tense situations. Jun and Sho (and the others) as ruthless and efficient gunmen is...hitting all my buttons! I like the way the intensity of the mission feeds into the intensity of the...post-mission scene :)

r_1_ss_a January 25 2010, 16:43:11 UTC

incredible! sho and jun plus intense situations, always an A+!

i love the contrast of them attacking each other because of their adrenaline and then the sweetness that comes afterwards, such a sucker for those. <3

awesome, thanks for writing this!!!

l3aibua January 26 2010, 09:38:43 UTC

I love these two in these kinds of situation where they only have each other as hope of their lives.
The tension, frustration and exhaustion are very well portrayed in the story.
Great work! ♥