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[One-shot] The newcomer [Until the end - Sequel]

Jul 17, 2009 22:02

Title: The newcomer - Until the end Sequel
Author: Still me XD
Pairing: Sakuraiba, Ohmiya
Genre: AU, comedy, romance, detective story, angst (?)
Rating: Pg-13, R (just to be safe n_n)
Summary: This is a sequel of the first one-shot. Detective Sakurai runs after The Miracle Boy again! XD
Disclamer: I own nothing. This is pure fiction but I wish it was ( Read more... )

p: ohmiya, r: pg-13, p: sakuraiba, # one-shot

Comments 30

arashiku July 17 2009, 20:53:40 UTC

FIRST!!! >.< Yay you updated XD Sorry for commenting when I didnt even read the first one yet LOL :P I'll go and read it right now! :D Great job anyways :) Thanks to your beta reader too :D Cant wait for next chapter of When you wihs upon a star :D Wait I said it right right? lol. Emi was going to name her Second Chance that but decided not XD Kay imma go read now :3
~Michi (Not Emi)

arashiku July 17 2009, 21:33:01 UTC

It was cute and sweet yet sad? Wow I'm so weird XD It was good :) Yet again I dont exactly like to read uh slightly mature stuff but oh well it was so sweet and cute and sad ish :P I loved it! So interesting :D Cant wait for next chapter of HWne you wish upon a star >.< Yay!
~Michi (Not Emi) But she'll probably read it sooner or later :3

saku062 July 18 2009, 06:08:09 UTC

Yep a little sad!
At first I didn't thought it would be this sad, but I was sooo inspired that the story writen itself XD

Again, I'm sorry for the mature part!! Sex is a part of love for me, so when it's cute and rabu rabu I don't find it shocking...SORRY! m(_ _)m But I tried to no describe the scene too much, that way everyone can read it!
I'll upload the next chapt of WYWUAS as soon as the beta-eading is done!

Thanks for reading and commenting!! ♥
Waiting for Emi's feedback as well ^^

arashiku July 18 2009, 15:46:19 UTC

Lol okay :3 I'll be waiting :D Emi's busy recently and like we said her bro doesnt let her use his comp that much :/ But shes gettin her new comp soon ane shell be sure to read your fics! XD Your welcome :P
~Michi (Not Emi)

gacktsgirl346 July 17 2009, 21:33:05 UTC

Kyaaaaa that was so awesome!! XDDD
I really love this story-line! Very well thought of! :DD
I remember reading the story before this, and i think this was a very good sequel to it! Kyaa i loved it! It was very smexy and steamy at points ne~ XDD
Yaaaaaaay for Sakuraiba!!! ^o^

saku062 July 18 2009, 06:10:17 UTC

XD yay I've got a "kyaaaa" !!!
Thanks for reading, I'm happy you liked it n_n
Sakuraiba is the best!!!! (well I like also the Sakurai x Miracle Boy XD)

Thanks ♥

aimai3 July 17 2009, 23:34:33 UTC

WOW!
that was amazing! <33

LOL.
for a second thought while i was reading i have this in mind :

Daikon pulled out his gun and shoot the Miracle Boy.

lousy thought. xDD

saku062 July 18 2009, 06:12:01 UTC

My god!! You've good a pic of the SK gang!! XDD
It's Daiki by the way but Daikon is good too n__n
I wouldn't kill the Miracle Boy!!!Never >_<

Thanks for reading!!

aimai3 July 18 2009, 07:14:27 UTC

xDD
thanks!
i know, i jut like the fact that Sho called him Daikon instead of Daiki xDD

ur welcome!

jenny_desu July 18 2009, 00:21:46 UTC

The beginning was so sad T____T
And then it was really cute <3 <3 <3
I don't know what I should say.
It was just so wonderful <3 <3 <3

Can't wait for the next Chapter 'When You Wish Upon A Star'^^

saku062 July 18 2009, 06:13:42 UTC

You've said enough don't worry ^^
I'm really glad to know you liked it!!

I'll try to update the next chapt ASAP ^^""

Thanks for reading and always commenting!