Comments | saku062: [One-shot] Until the end

saku062

[One-shot] Until the end

Jul 14, 2009 16:32

This is a gift for
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p: ohmiya, until the end, r: pg-13, p: sakuraiba, # one-shot

Comments 29

jenny_desu July 14 2009, 17:16:08 UTC

The first one was soooo sad...
I almost cried T______T
But I like it. I really like it.

The second one was hot^^
Sho couldn't catch him... again XD
I wonder what will happen when Sho comes back home XD

Thanks for sharing^^

saku062 July 14 2009, 18:29:43 UTC

Yes it's sad ^^' At the begining I didn't plan it will be sad^^'
And the end for the first seems to be a sad ending, but IT'S NOT!!

For the second...I decided to write it at the end XD I didn't plan that at first ^^"
It's more crack than pron...hum XD
Maybe I'll write a sequel? who knows? XD

Thanks for reading ♥

a_mbry0 July 14 2009, 20:00:46 UTC

OMG
this was so GOOD!
hehehe the ending was perfect, if it depends on Sho they will never catch The Miracle Boy ;DD

saku062 July 15 2009, 06:51:14 UTC

Thanks ^^
I like the ending too. I don't know why but I think Sho loves his job more now XD Even if The Miracle Boy still running!

Thanks for reading

a_mbry0 July 15 2009, 10:27:51 UTC

hahah i bet he loves his job more now!
chasing The Miracle Boy must bee much more fun XDD

soulezz July 14 2009, 21:16:46 UTC

the beginning of the story gives a sudden feeling of sadness and hopelessness for Sho and Aiba, i though it was the end when Aiba was caught but as its near the end or the second part i couldn't help but push a smile on my mouth...Sho and Aiba are totally having fun with their little new game...=D)

i really do hope you'll write a sequel to this story it's so cute and i can't help but want to read more. therefore please, please consider on writing a sequel...when you have time or the plot bunnies are being active....=D)

saku062 July 15 2009, 06:54:49 UTC

I like when it's a tragedic love story, but I love it when it ends well and a little funny XD Believe me I was having fun writing their new game n___n

I have to say that I really love this AU. Maybe because I'm a detective stories fan, but I really love this story (which is unsual because I hate what I create XD) And right after it was posted, I wanted to make a sequel. There's just a tiny ridiculous problem: I need a plot XD

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

soulezz July 15 2009, 08:34:53 UTC

i'll really like to say 'there is know worry i'm on the way' but in reality i can't help you with a plot either since i have absolutely know idea where to start. yet, just now a weird image popped into my mind. Sho sitting in an investigating room like a child being scold by his boss for fooling aroudn during duty time...=D)

well i hope this image that suddenly appear in my mind will help you with the sequel. i'm sure a lot of people are willing to give you plot idea because they too are forward to a sequel...=D)

saku062 July 15 2009, 12:30:42 UTC

Yeah in fact your idea helps me a lot XD I had a plot, but I didn't turn like I wanted and when I read your comment, I found what I wanted to write XD

I don't think there are a lot of people who want a sequel, but I really love this story and its setting ^^'
And I need a break from When You Wish Upon A Star

Thanks for your help!! ♥

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cherry_armrest July 15 2009, 11:19:09 UTC

Oooh :D a surprise!

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saku062 July 15 2009, 12:26:36 UTC

*Hugs back*

Hope you liked it. This isn't great, but I really liked to write it ^^

I'm writing a sequel now, I have to admit I really, REALLY love this AU XD
Thnks for reading, and...sorry for ALL the mistakes
m(_ _)m

zukkoke_iero July 15 2009, 15:11:34 UTC

It's not disappointing at all!! Oh damn! I love this! Seriously, i rarely read sakuraiba but this is awesome! XD sho and oh chan as detective is just LOVE and i know that the thief sho chases after is aiba! And nino! He's in jail! And oh chan loves him XD oh... Sweet!! XDDD and cosplay!sex, thief and detective! Hot! Hahaha... I love this, \^^/

saku062 July 15 2009, 19:07:32 UTC

I'm glad ^^
Sorry, there's not a lot of Ohmiya ^^' My fav pair is Sakuraiba and I have some difficulties to writte another pair XD
I love the detective idea, too. I think Sho and Ohno would be sexy (Well...Sho was "sexy" in his Yattaman costume XD)
You shouldn't have read the cosplay!sex!!! you're too youuuunngggg! (Just kiding XD)
Thanks for your cuute comment *hugs* ♥

kocchie July 16 2009, 20:57:10 UTC

uwa! surprisingly i like it! (it's bec i don't like AU at all ^ ^) but I like this fic. thanks!

look.... i have one idea. can you let me translate it? you know i'm russian and I'd like to let my friends who can't read English read this fic =) can you let me translate it?..
even I have problems with free time if you let me I'd like to transtate it someday ^ ^

btw, aaaw. i want Ohmiya special of this fic xD

saku062 July 17 2009, 09:48:23 UTC

Ah I'm happy!! If you liked it despite you don't like AU, if feel accomplished n___n

Well, thanks for the offer ^^' You can translate it if you want...even if I don't think this story deserves it XD But I'm honored!

E~ Ohmiya? I'm not very at ease with them, I mean, even in my regular fics I have trouble with this pair (I don't why XD) But I'll tink about it n_n

Thanks for reading!!!

kocchie July 17 2009, 09:54:21 UTC

okay! this is good. should I let you know when my translation is done?)

uwaaa *_* i'll be waiting for! *_* it will be great if you write it <33

saku062 July 17 2009, 11:46:09 UTC

Yeah thanks if it doesn't bother you ^^'
I would like to see it in russian...even if I won't undesrstand anything XD