Comments | saku062: One-shot: Gâteau au chocolat

saku062

One-shot: Gâteau au chocolat

Jun 05, 2009 20:54

OK. First of all: Please be nice XD I warn you it's not something big or great. I just wanted to write something in English. I really love writing even if I'm not a great writer.

The idea came from a "talk" with theproudpenguin about a picture of Sho and his air muscle on a recent photo shoot.

Here is the pic:

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r: pg-13, p: sakuraiba, # one-shot

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saku062 June 6 2009, 07:38:01 UTC

Thanks for reading and for the comment ^^
I'm relieved you liked it <3

laurachan2 June 6 2009, 05:53:56 UTC

It was really cute sho and aiba awwwww

saku062 June 6 2009, 07:36:02 UTC

Yes Sho and Aiba are cute together *_*
Glad you liked it.
Thanks for reading!

cherry_armrest June 7 2009, 16:21:43 UTC

Hey, why don't you pimp it to the comms? ~_^

Looking forward to your next fic!

saku062 June 7 2009, 18:25:09 UTC

Well I will. When I'll understand how to do XD I know how it works (sais the girl who read five times the rules XD) But I'm afraid of making a mistake ^^''
But I will definitely do it...Someday XD

Thanks, I'm looking forward yours as well!

citlecrewolf June 7 2009, 23:57:03 UTC

I liked it, especially funny the way Nino and Jun started to get lost in the competition and Sho ended up with nothing to eat :) Thanks.

saku062 June 8 2009, 14:38:10 UTC

I don't know why Jun got lost. Nino, I could undestand, but why Jun? Something hiding, maybe? XD
Yes, I love to torture my beloved Sho, and what's worse than desserts you can't eat? XD
Thanks for reading.

i_am_zan June 8 2009, 03:27:14 UTC

Aiba has the best weapons of course ... he *IS* Aiba and who can resist choc. cake!?

This is a lovely story and good job on your beta! She helped you get across what you wanted to say beautifully. She writes very well and you found a good beta in CA!

A very beautiful story. Maybe you should translate your other stories too! It'll help you practice no?

saku062 June 8 2009, 14:43:27 UTC

And what it would be if Aiba was in a chocolate cake? *_*

Thank you, I'm hapy you liked it.
Yes cherry is a great person! She has worked very hard to help me and give me a lot of her time. I wld never thanks her enought.

I don't have Arashi's stories, even in French. But I'll try to improve my English in writing more!

Thank you for reading and commenting n_n